Just caught up.
I like how you are on point with each characters.
Feel sorry for the princess.
Can't wait for the next update.

great chapter

This was really good. While Theon's darker development was expected now that he has no Ramsay to break him, I love how Arya actually knows. They actually had a very nice moment there. Further showing that Theon is a Stark, even though he is still conflicted.

Great stuff

Clever to have the dire wolves prevent the bedding - that's new to me

Also, Merry Christmas!

I can't believe there is 2 more chapters! Where has time gone?

This was an amazing chapter! I do hope that Theon gets some form of character development without Ramsay being necessary for it.
And I love how Jon essentially followed the more positive example of Prince Duncan from Rhaegar’s mistake. Rhaegar did follow his example but in a more destructive manner.

I have such a soft spot for Theon and Arya. They both feel like they have so much to prove about who they are. Love the walls stopping the bedding, there’s no way they would allow that to occur.

I'm not for the Redstark name. It doesn't fit Jon.

I appreciate Theon wanting to be a part of House Stark while he is simultaneously wrestling with the part of him that is Ironborn.

Dacey's response to finding out about Jon's lineage was well played. I also like how you show Jon as someone who would turn away crowns and thrones for those he loved and cared for. Dacey certainly makes a good match for Jon & vice versa in this narrative. At the same time, Arya's interaction with Theon and Jon is respectively funny and emotionally deep.

I really liked how the direwolves stood up for the newlyweds. Was Ghost the largest of the direwolves? Or did you mean to say Grey Wind was the largest, since he's the alpha of the pack?

One of my biggest concerns about Domeric and Sansa is he is walking a very fine line between being unlike his father and those before him and being another Red King of the Dreadfort. I hope Sansa does not inherit the worst parts of being a Bolton and keeps what makes her a Stark. If nothing else, perhaps the Stark in her will help Domeric keep his balance and not lose his way.

whoa

Good Chapter.

I really like where you re going with Jon/Darcey relationship and how ur gonna develop Theon. Im looking forward to the remaining chapters :)

protective jon was quite funny, though i must say were you hinting at a theon/arya pairing? i thought id hate it but you wrote it quite well. id love to see an iron lady arya smacking stupid iron born around on the iron islands, while hey all duck their heads apologizing.

Interesting story! I think you have read Robb Returns,as this story seems to be a blend between that and canon Game of Thrones. I consider GoT as a mix between Lord of the Rings and Lovecraft, with a splash of something hentai that I can't recall at the moment. In short, Much better than Canon in nearly every way.