Reviews for Our Blades Are Sharp |
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Ojha chapter 1 . 6/23/2015 This is definitely worth continuing. This could change everything: Sansa not going to KL, houses Ryswell and Dustin sending more man with Robb, Winterfell not getting burned etc. Doms conflict about his family's history is understandable. Update soon. |
Erial K chapter 1 . 6/23/2015 I enjoyed this i hope you continue, i like your writing style. |
MrSir17 chapter 1 . 6/23/2015 It's an interesting first chapter! As someone who hasn't read the books but only the show I didn't know that Roose ever even had a true born son. But if Dom had been alive I expect that's exactly how he would've acted. I'm curious to see how the Starks interact with Dom. And how his presence will change antything! Can't wait to read more! |
thunder18 chapter 1 . 6/23/2015 Great chapter Update soon |
lavaducks chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 Please continue! I'm looking forward to seeing how Domeric will effect the story. I'm already rooting for him to succeed and change what the Bolton name stands for! |
Cancer-Chris chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 I like this idea and look forward to reading more. One thing though: the Bolton heraldry is a res flayed man on a pink (not blue) background. |
Lieschen7 chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 I would definitely like to read more for this story! Domeric Bolton is mentioned so infrequently here on the site. :( A possibility of a future meeting between him and Ramsay would be exciting to see. As I said, This story is certainly worth continuing; there are so many plot paths this story can go with a character that has a rather vague description in the canon storyline. That alone would make this story an intriguing read. Unlike other book/show characters with their plot lines already well developed and only so many ways you could take them in a fanfic without being overused, a story about Domeric is anyone's guess! |
Greywing chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 Very good first chapter, please continue. With how you have made Domeric's personality it will be interesting to see how he turns out, because it looks like he finds some of the Bolton traditions horrible and seams to have honor, but he also desires the approval of his father. This will be a interesting dynamic of balancing what is right and his struggle with gaining his father's approval. Also with how you have made his personality I agree with the guest reviewer that he could easily become friends with the Stark children. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 Keep going with this its pretty good so far. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 I hate the boltons but honestly i've always wondered what would happen if domeric lived. From the books, he seemed like he could be a top notch lord of the dreadfort. And with how you made his personality, i could see him and robb and him and jon hitting it off, but im not sure if you're going in that direction. Im sure he'll hate theon that insecure bastard, who doesn't hate him. This has plenty potential and could be a great read! That first chapter was great and i felt like you got barbrey and roose down well. Lol grey rat, she really does despise maesters |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 Most certainly continue. Boltons are my favorite house and this opener is very well written. Especially considering the minimal information given on Domeric. Very eager to read more and see how the Starks will receive him. |