Dacey knowing how The Prince and Lyanna looks seems a bit strange. Else it was a good chapter

hell yeah! those direwolves are everything omg hahaha I was just waiting for Jon, Robb and Arya to just stab someone and then the direwolves stole the show LOL also, Jon and Davey are so beautiful! I'm still heartbroken about my otp Robb/Myrcella, but I'm learning to like those two! thank you so much for writing this!

This is great this is my absolute favorite ASOIAF fanfiction on the site and I love what you are doing with the characters.

I liked the direwolves 'taking part' on the bedding. ;p
Nice chapter, good work.

I can’t get enough of Domeric and Sansa! When I first read about what happened to Domeric I hated Ramsey 10 times more cus I knew that he could’ve been a potential love interest for Sansa. There aren’t that many Domeric fanfics let alone good ones. Yours is FANTASTIC! If you happen to know any others I’d love a recommendation. The ONLY thing that I would change is that Myrcella had dark hair instead of blonde cus then she could still be with Robb. They genuinely started caring for each other then this bombshell drops and ruins it. Can’t wait for another chapter. Honestly can’t, like the needs to be another chapter within the next few days. Same with your other stories too. I feel like it’s a crime to torture us with waiting but that’s just me. Hope there’s another chapter soon.

Now THAT'S a bedding to get behind:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I love it, this story is so different and fresh. Thanks for writing.

Read all 63 chapters in a week, great work, can't wait for the rest

You did well with the Mountain's death scene and I for one appreciate your avoidance of over detailed fights and battles. They don't play out very well on the pages even if you have the writing chops and understanding of period warfare.

Satisfaction

I am so happy with your story. I would just like to say first and foremost that you are an amazing writer. just fantastic. I just binged this story . it was so good I could not put my phone down. I am so happy, because you changed the plot. this is not just another fic, that just follows the original version with added conversation. you made ripples and they are so incredibly interesting. I have not been so happy about an OC fic in a long time. so thank your for sharing this master piece. and I look forward to reading what comes next.

Are you planning on finishing your story? It's been over a month since you submitted chapter 63 and if you've given up you should just tell us.

Sweet. Finally the marriage has occured, and no one important has died. But this makes me curious, what is Bolton's plan? Does he indeed plan to wipe out the males of house Stark to gain control of it like was foreshadowed earlier? Or will any respect/fear/wariness he feels towards Eddard Stark cause him to avoid risking that? Hmmm

I don't know if you look at reviews on older chapters, but at the very end of the chapter in Thoros' comment it should just be "should", not "should be." Just a small error there

One of the best stories I’ve read! Amazing fic!