Oh Sansa you know not what you have just done. Those few little questioning words will unravel your whole world.

Damm. This was fucking dope. He still got Longclaw. I love that. Great fucking job. This means that he’ll be available for the war of the 5 kings too. Can’t wait for it.

I'm really enjoying your story here. I like that things are changed from the original work instead of following along with the story just from your extra person's view. If you are wondering what kind of actions Robb Stark might take I'd suggest taking a look at a young Edward IV of England, since he was Martin's inspiration for the character.

I loved this story! Thank you for posting it because it just made my day, week, and month!

Wow. Quite the chapter for Domeric. Showing a bit of his dark side. Surprised you didn't go with the blood eagle.

Aahhh, fluffy happy times.

Comerica and Sansa are so damn cute together!

Love this book can't wait to start the sequel. You've completely changed my view if the Boltons and thank you for that

Loved this chapter . You've actually changed my view on house Bolton . Thank you for this

Awesome fic! Thanks

Wow! I really hope Ned tears shreds off Catelyn for that one!

Nicely done, Domeric, nicely done. Wait until the right time, then strike. And in a way that can't be pointed to you, though Theon will learn that it was you, as you want him to know the price of provoking you.

Well, I feel sorry for Myrcella and I wish that Catelyn had come to some sort of unfortunate end, but I certainly enjoyed this story and am very much looking forward to reading the sequel.

I have read this story through in a matter of days and loved every second of it! Your characters are vivid and accurate portrayals, and their gradual changes over the course of events are believable. I was spellbound by Sansa's growth, and her growing relationship with Dom.
But the couple that crept up on me was Robb and Myrcella. When their betrothal was announced I truly didn't expect much more than a bland courtship with little depth. (More fool me!) I watched the little moments grow until I was left weeping at their heartache. The scene where she greets Grey Wind was particularly poignant.
I love your 'ripple effect' to storytelling, where a change here sets three more things in motion, or takes characters out of play because they weren't in place for a moment that arrived earlier.
I would say more, but I have a sequel to begin...

BTW, the Bolton Helm is called a 'Narrowed' or 'English' Sallet.
The sallet being the main helm seen in the Northmen in the show.