Okay, so when Jon and Dacey are talking about the Targaryens, there's a few things wrong. First, Maegor I was never exiled. He did face a ton of conflict and opposition yes, and afterwards, Jaeherys I ended all Targaryen customs of Polygamy, but he was never exiled (unless it was during the reign of his brother Aenys I). Second, Prince Duncan the Small is Jon's great, great uncle, specifically not what one consider their ancestor in this case.

I love the irony at the beginning. It is hinted in the main story that the Bolton tradition of flaying particularly Starks came from them not seeing Skinchanging as being natural, and thus would skin the skinchanger.

While yes, Davos going around to recruit people to Stannis's cause isn't too much of an issue (though traveling to Riverrun probably isn't too practical), what is an issue is the fact that he tells them that Ned declared for Stannis. While this info did seemingly get leaked in the show, and Jon and Stannis do mention it, in the books, Robb specifically didn't know that Ned had tried to put Stannis on the throne, or that Stannis was the true heir. It wasn't until him reading Stannis's letter that he may have come to realize that Stannis was the rightful heir and Joffrey wasn't.
And why would Ned have been able to get word to Stannis, and why would Davos telling them at this point change a thing then? That info would've been with Domeric and Sansa (and thus, Davos's presence here is redundant as they would already know), or in this scenario Ned actually managed to get word out which seems a stretch considering that Ned's biggest problem during AGOT was the fact that he was crunched for time, and specifically didn't have time to do things like send Sansa and Arya away, or flee, or get word to Stannis.

I'm not sure why the Lannisters are offering terms that are unreasonable like taking Theon on as a ward. You had in a previous chapter Keven wanting to have Robb serve on the Small Council, and if one were to be serving on the Small Council, they might bring retainers and companions, one of whom would likely be Theon. Who Theon is with wouldn't be an issue in this case as he's in King's Landing all the same.

Binged in two days! Domeric ignore stark honor is for the arrogant

Warg together war together

Poor myc no fairy tale ending for you

Erm...
The Black Cells weren't understaffed. They were way over staffed. They had 29 goalers for 6 prisoners Jaime discovers in Feast, and only half ever even show up for work.

So will a viper, a frog, and Arstan Whitebeard all bump into Daenerys?...

excellent story going to start part two.

I love how you made Domeric a very likable character without compromising his identity as Bolton and what that means.

Yeah, another story where nothing changes. And I suppose when everything goes to shit in King's Landing, the Boltons will be useless and Domeric will have to get Sansa back from Joffrey? Fun.

Oh god all this Dom and Sansa mushy romance is really getting old. I don’t mind a few scenarios every few chapters, but to have EVERY SINGLE FUCKING chapter. Good god

Finally I read this, It was an amazing story, how you puto The characters in a very strategic place, there Is still so much things I want to know, I loved this story sincd The beginning, Congrats! I loved It.

I’ve really enjoyed the story and effort put into this tale. Thank you for the hard work and stunning development within the story.

Hands down best ASOIAF fic I've read so far.

I have been following this Story since the begining and I do consider it an excellent read.. But I do have one issue,Ned sending Domeric to the North to lead the forces,I don't think Ned would do that.. Considering the level of power the Bolton's have in this TL and his anger over Dom's actions in dealing with the Bloody Mummers I don't believe Ned would give that level of power over the North to a Bolton.. For all Ned's qualities as a man he is still a feudal Lord and.