Reviews for Sins: The Evil You Create REBOOT
Leaf Ranger chapter 3 . 7/24/2015
Well glad to see the GIW got their butts handed to them. That was awesome and epic.

With regards to Jinx, I looked up her powers, and they are magic based. She is skilled in sorcery, hexes, and the ability to affect probabilities, though she specializes in increasing a person's ability to be affected by bad luck. She's also a skilled acrobat and agile fighter, as well as being skilled in hand to hand combat. So she could offer a different branch of magic from raven, who's skilled in tons of magic EXCEPT sorcery and hexes apparently. Not to mention Jinx can go in hand to hand combat, while Raven cannot.

Overall, excellent chapter man. Keep it up!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
You mother fucker you got rid of first male nin reboot first the original now this one too thats to far fuck you!anyone would be able to tell he's really just sad. y y y would u do that?*stops typing sits in his chair and cries and cries* some people say he's still crying seriously though your bringing me to tears please please bring them back im begging you.
Story Artist chapter 2 . 7/23/2015
Dude, WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR OTHER STORIES?!
Zer0the0mega108 chapter 2 . 7/19/2015
You know what would be a cool look for him, Spawn's suit from Marvel. Don't know why, it would just look cool with him.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/15/2015
Killer frost please
StarWing1995 chapter 2 . 7/13/2015
Ops its actually Starwing1995 I got the M capitalize by mistake and hope you go with my friend request.
StarWing1995 chapter 2 . 7/13/2015
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P.s. My psn username is StarWing1995
Dialga213 chapter 2 . 7/9/2015
Danny's evolving that means more ghost powers!? i like the nephew of Lex Luthor btw. keep up the good work!
Wingd knight chapter 2 . 7/7/2015
Well, first off I have to say that this is looking to be quite the story. Second, I feel that the harem should include: Blackfire, Supergirl, Powergirl, Galactica(that is how you spell her name right? Supergirl's clone anyways) Batgirl, Ember, Zatanna, Ravenger, Jinx, possibly Raven and Starfire, and perhaps more.
On another note, can you imagine the looks on people like Superman and Batman and Vlad's faces when Luthor claims Danny as not only his blood nephew, but also his heir and possibly his adoptive son as well? Ha, priceless.
Hope you update soon,
Wingd Knight
haywireseagull chapter 2 . 7/7/2015
i think this reboot is nice with the whole backstory to the how he got a new body and ect. i am also wondering if starfire is still on the list besides that i am looking forward to the next chapter
Isom chapter 2 . 7/6/2015
They say it's the croc you don't see that kills you and the punch you don't see coming that knocks you down.

So I did not see that coming! Luthor is Danny's uncle? It makes sense since it looks like Maddie came from a bunch of hillbillies.

Also glad to see some development in Danny and Blackfire's relationship.

As for Danny's future it looks like Danny has some ectoplasm still in his dna he might still has his powers or develop something new.

As for Danny's training before moving on to his magic training why not have spade face off against Slades old team the suicide squad.

Now for harem ideas

Harley Quinn: after meeting during Danny's final test she is interested by the boy. After joker dies, or beats her badly, he comforts her and one thing leads to another.

Poison ivy: as part of her friendship with Harley she tolerates Danny, having a distrust of men. However, danny finds a way to magically enhance her plants eventually she joins in with Harley.

Ravager: she joins in Danny's training with her father. She steadily develops an interest in Danny growing into a full relationship.

Blackfire: a given. She gets jealous with the other girls around Danny and claims him first

Jinx: as one of Danny's many tests he has to face against the hive five. Jinx becomes interested in Danny's skills and winds up falling for him after being left for dead when hive academy comes down

Cheshire: on Danny's first mission he runs into the cat assassin. After a long mission she hunts Danny down after a fight they wind up in bed together

Batgirl (Barbara Gordon): after her father is murdered by a crooked cop and the cop islet off with a slap on the wrist Barbara's trust in justice is broken. She is the approached by Cerberus who offers a chances to revenge. Magically healing her spine and enhancing her strength speed and agility she joins on as one of Danny's lovers and as an agent in Gotham.
Silver crow chapter 2 . 7/5/2015
Great chapter loved Danny Luthor and hope we get another soon
cheerfullygrim chapter 2 . 7/5/2015
ok, I did not see you making Lex Luthor Danny's uncle. Great creativity and please post soon.
Homemadeplanet0 chapter 2 . 7/5/2015
Excited to see where it goes
Zerohero chapter 2 . 7/4/2015
Good chapter!
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