ALTHOUGH SHE IS NOW A SLAVE, Hermione is quite correct. Harry MUST give her orders. She has
killed Ron to protect her Master, Harry Potter. Emotionally she's a wreck, as would any girl be if
they went through what she went through. She needs direction and she needs to focus.

Only one other person other than Hermione uses the Killing Curse, and that's Voldemort.

As an ex-Ravenclaw student from the Class of 1972-78, I remember a time when owning female
slaves was not only legal, but actively encouraged, particularly if the female student was either
muggle-born or half-blood. It would be for their own protection, but they were always treated
well. Their slavery usuall ended after their graduation, though some could-and DID, ask NOT to
to be released from their slavery, since they found security and safety in it.

Great story. Boy it gives me an idea about this.

Wow. This one was hauntingly beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us.

It could have being better that Daphne had asked to be transferred ownership of Hermione. So they could have being together. Also Harry could have give Hermione kids so they could have been precious to her because they were his master.

That could have being the best option, also because Harry needed Black heirs.

Thanks.

Thanks

wow... what an interesting story
I really enjoyed reading that and felt for Hermione... luckily she has such amazing friends.

and while I'll never fully like Ron, this story's Ron got a rotten deal and I feel for him and Hermione.
well done

I found this story to be very unusual, if not strange, Definitely surprising, but not disappointing. I find it difficult to describe the story and my feelings about it.
Thank you for sharing your creativity

Interesting read but the tones of story are bit uneven. It really should be two separate stories but it still work somehow.

I would say to you that you should be bolder in the second half of the story, it could be just me missing the details (in that case, I apologize), it just doesn't seem realistic for your Daphne to voluntarily entering servitude for life just trying to be "someone who can completely understand her." I am not saying write a scene where the girls are playing softball but a subtle hint of romance and fulfillment between Hermione and Daphne would serve the overall ending better.

This is just a random thought I had while reading your story under the lens of comedy: What would've happened when Harry orders Hermione to fire the same slave-making spell back at him?

Thank you for sharing your work!

Yeah, it never made any sense that Ron could open the chamber. Can we all agree that book 7 didn't make much sense period?

Hello, I have really enjoyed reading this Wonderful story, but I have to tell you that I think that you got Ron was never that understanding, and always thought of himself before ANYONE else. Thank you for sharing your story. I really did love it.

This is really good!

Seems like there's an obvious way for Hermione to not neglect her children: have them with Harry.