Saw this poll notice and it pissed me of. You as an author should not pander to the desires of your readers. You should write what you want to write, not what they want you to write. That said, the larger the Harem, the worse the story, with to many girls, the characters will be lessened, I have seen it happen multiple times before, it is not a pretty thing. So don't go pandering to the desires of people just wanting Harry to bed as many women as possible. That said, I do hope you keep to the Harem the size you want it to be.

Sorry for the rant, it is just that I really dislike pairing polls of any kind. That said, onwards to the review of the story.

I do not like "The Forgotten Child" angle much, but I do have a feeling it is not done intentionally by his parents and siblings, and considering how Voldemort send his thoughts into Harry to get him to cut ties to his family, I am suspecting Voldemort actually has something to do with him being forgotten. Your Quirell is different from most portrayals of him, which is interesting.

I also liked your portrayal of Draco, usually don't like that character, you have even made Snape look like a nice enough character. with you treating these characters well, I have high hopes of this not turning into a bashing fest were you are going to bash Dumbledore and the weasley's, And I do pray you are not going to do so, as Bashing usually makes stories look stupid, and with how rare actually good Dumbledore is these days, it would be a pleasure seeing one.

With that said, I eagerly await the next chapter. Story favorited.

With regards Melfice-sama.

Smaller please. Most of the large harems 7 you start to lose touch with the members of said harem.

I'm not crazy about the idea of this being put down to a poll... Usually it's 'perverts unite' about this type a thing.

I like small harems. get to large and its impossible to keep track of them all.

I would say make the harem larger or keep it the current size but 12 sounds nice beside I love your story either way their awesome keep it up

5 to 8 is best, lets you keep enough time to all the girls so the relationships don't become superfluous.

there is no vote going for this title.

10 to 11

Smaller I think 6 is a good size. Love the story !

Yes, finally a Quirell who isn't weak and pathetic. I would have preferred he said the strongest being instead of mage but... meh. I know I'm just a reader and I have no rights to the story and this isn't a flame. But your title.. is really bad lol.

Ugh it pains me that so Good fic will be not on my following list and it's all beacuse this '... won't go larger then ten elevn girls' part. Shame. Shame. Well good luck.

I love it, good work 10/10

The hat mentioned that harry already knew occlumency in chp.1 - how was Voldemort able to use legilimency without harry noticing?

Awesome story though. A

can't wait for the next chapter

I rarely give reviews but I have to say that I'm really loving ur fic so far. It's even got me imagining how I would write my own version of the story and I can't find much I'd change which says a lot of how much I like it. I did have one idea. I dunno if you've seen the show Fairy Tail but they have a magic similar to bushin called thought projection. The difference is that masters of it can make their "bushins" solid to the point that others can't even sense anything wrong with it. I was thinking that you could use the magic that way instead of making bushin and kage bushin two different spells. To sort of make the capability of making solid clones even more of a show of mastery.

Anyway, hope u update soon!