Reviews for Code: DxD Potter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I need more of this in my life! Please update it. |
![]() ![]() It's been over a year now, any chance you could let us know if you're still writing or not? |
![]() ![]() ![]() with what you've set up in chaos one alone, marvels dr strange stile magic fits in here perfectly, more so than you even realize. probably lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. I just recently stumbled across this little gem and I have to say its amazing. Harry is a character with flaws. But, at the same time he's only eleven years old and we can clearly see he has a lot of growth ahead of him. Though, please don't tell me that the evil voice in his head is NOT a piece of Voldemort's soul. That would be too clichè. I know how you said that the inital thoughts were due to Leglimency, but we also see them again before he goes through the door in the forbiddon corridor. And, then later on the voice seems to change personality when telling him not to stop moping. My guess is a sentient Sacred Gear cuz thats the only other thing that makes sense. Anyhow, I hope to see this story updated soon what with how the last update was in February. Till then :) |
![]() ![]() to much cliche |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting chapter.. It shows us Dumbledor perspective and Flamel to.. As does it strengthen the image that Potter really loves each other, it just Harry is a little insecure about himself and listening too much on what other people saying.. I'm actually surprised that Lucy didn't going with them.. I mean she must know that Harry is in hospital wing, and judging how close they are I'm pretty sure she would worrying about his condition very much and would jump at a chance to see that he is alright.. Thx for the chapter and I looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I surprised that you end the first year in this fashion, after all the build up in the last chapter.. Not that I'm really complain of course.. Btw will Harry ever found out that Quirrel is in their side? Oh yeah did you already closed the harem poll? I really want to see who potential girls for Harry and choose who I like, and feel most suited in my opinion.. Well I hope at least Daphne is one of Harry girls.. I'm Looking forward to what will happen in the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chapter.. It answers some of the question.. Btw I really like how you portray Quirrel.. I never read stories that make Quirrel as someone that unfortunately in the wrong place and wrong time, that actually still have enough power and will to try defy Voldemort, and want to try protect wizarding world... Most story only make him as incompetent follower, or someone with potential but is in Voldy pocket.. It would be interesting to see how Harry would rise up against his insecurity, and jealousy and try to see that his family is really-really loves him in their own way.. Because that the impression that I get from their interactions with Harry.. Btw I forgot to mention it in last review.. I curious why you make Harry eyes violet? Not that I have any problems with that but one of few traits that makes Harry Potter, welll.. Harry, is his Green eyes.. With how you describe him it would look like he is Lelouch but with name Harry Potter instead.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm.. Interesting.. Please keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this story, keep up the good work. I hope you'll be able to find some time to update soon, but I get that school takes priority over fanfiction. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really cool! Really awesome story, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() I always enjoy an AU fic every now and then. One that tends to blend two worlds into one, or multiples. I have one myself, and Because I'm too lazy to log-in this names coming up. And don't worry, I have a barrel of cheesefries, a beer glass of mountain dew, and Airhorn on standby, and a playlist of the entire Anarchy Reigns soundtrack playing right now. Now all I need to do is get naked and watch Nickelodeon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
![]() ![]() Judging from the title and crossover...his sacred gear is probably the Geass Code. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You repeatedly misspell Auror as Aurora. You also said "me and Pernelle (or Nicholas)" when it really should be "Nicholas and I('s)" especially given the age of the characters so they should be more formal/use older speech patterns most of the time they speak. Other than that the story is going really well. |