Please come back and continue this story!

Next Chapter when?

For the Ron Question 2 & 4 makes the most sense. If you want to keep him close to Hrry longer without begin a spy you can start with 1 and then have him switch to 2 deciding this is not his path. THis would even give Ron a chance to use his begining sith training to Control his emotions to a degree and prehaps make a new force tradition or a less militant version of the Jedi.

I love the recent parts with Ron, please keep updating the story. This is awesome. Awaiting more

Yeah, this is retarded. Stop writing.

This is brain dead. A barely knight level Sith was able to take over and command four jedi masters? Go die, retard.

No one will really read this comment, but I just need to vent. What the actual fuck!? This chapter most characters turned into blithering morons. Why? Grandstanding galore, nothing of that understated cleverness of before, just chunibyo - style stupid monologues.

very well done

very interesting

nice

Tx

Hell of a twist, I enjoyed the alternate trials, this endgame is going to be twisty as shit. Good work!

I’ve managed to read upto chapter 11 and will not go further. The story is pretty decent and I would have followed. However it urgently needs an editor. It’s extremely poorly written. Lots of spelling mistakes. Occasional grammar mistake. And sentence structure sucks most of the time. It’s pretty obvious that the author does a super rough draft and publishes it without proofreading even once. Shame.

Really interesting story! Please update soon.

"... I think I have a girlfriend..."

ROFLMAO
OMG, I don't think I've laughed so hard for an HP fanfic before now. Thank you for almost giving me a heart attack and breaking my office chair.