|Reviews for Transparent Wings|
| era-romance chapter 6 . 7/18
just going to say that while Mia is kyokos manager, I really dont like how she seems to steam roll over EVERY aspect of kyokos life. it's like kyoko has no control over her image, the people she spends time with, the food she eats, where she lives, even what jobs she takes. I don't know if this is an accurate depiction of a manger/client relationship; if it is, I'm truly glad I did not get into the entertainment industry
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 22 . 6/3
This is Great!
They finally caught the culprit with minimal damage...
Everything is Great! The relationships with the OCs are Great!
The Truth Revelation between Kyoko and Ren are Absolutely Great! All their Moments... And their acts together... And the Sweet Tender Kisses... I'm Loving it!
| claraowl chapter 22 . 3/19
I love this 3
| dappledsunbeams chapter 6 . 3/11
I'm really enjoying this story, thank you for writing! I'm always down for Kyoko & Ren fluff but I like that you're taking it slow (so true to character). I'm currently on Chapter 6; regarding your AN about Mia and reviewer's labeling her as pushy, I agree that she's rather forceful but I also think she's perfect for Kyoko and wanted to share my support in your choices. It brings the reader (at least me) into the Kyoko head space of not wanting to be a burden, her dislike of individual attention, and her discomfort related to her self-esteem. I absolutely align with those feelings as I read, being a bit uncomfortable but also know it's for the best in Kyoko's career. Combined with the drama of the break-in (can't wait to get more on who's behind it and why!), I'm loving this story because of Kyoko's slow character growth in a way I wish I was getting from the manga. Keep up the awesome work! I can't wait to get through existing chapters and eagerly await more :)
| ladygraywolf chapter 6 . 10/19/2019
she didn't have to be such a bh about it.
| TheThreeMuse chapter 11 . 6/2/2019
I have been enjoying the story so far, however, I felt the development of this chapter was too fast and there wasn’t enough build up before the sudden confession.
| rumly111 chapter 20 . 5/22/2019
The story should be named "Kyoko being an idiot"
| Tsumujikaze Yumi chapter 22 . 4/30/2019
Thank you so much !
| Maui0murice chapter 22 . 4/30/2019
Ahhhhhh! Thank you so much for finishing this fic! It was beautifully done!
| misherukuro chapter 20 . 4/30/2019
Thanks for sharing your writing.
| H-Nala chapter 22 . 4/30/2019
Thanks for finishing the story. but I've forgotten what the secret is about.
| valie france chapter 1 . 4/30/2019
WOW WOW WOW : D qu'elle début MAGNIFIQUE ! cette histoire me tient le ventre , elle est si palpitante , si bien écrite ! je te félicite avec mon coeur ! Hâte de continuer à lire , pourtant il faut que je parte travailler mais dès que je rentre ce soir : je me transporte dans ta Magique histoire ! MERCI pour ton imagination et de me faire rêver ainsi . J'adore tant REN & KYOKO ! les histoires bien écrites et pensées par les fanfictions me tiennent en vie ! Mon coeur est si triste et vide et vous seules écrivains de talent me mettent de la chaleur dans mon coeur. Alors MERCI INFINIMENT
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/14/2019
Please when will you be posting so exciting will ren find her will she die what’s going to happen please please post new chapter I’ve missed this from so much I just can’t take it anymore it’s been torture waiting for the new update it’s been 2yrs already so please Come back to us we’re missing you no joke missing you
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/1/2019
Please post new chapter I know it's been awhile but I check all the time pray n hoping for a new chapter so please post
| Grayladywoolf chapter 19 . 8/22/2018
I really hope you finish this story. I want to see her get out of it or have Kuon save her.