This fic is making me day dream about what's gonna happen next! The chapters are pretty lengthy and they always leave me wanting for more! What else could I ask for?

So confused about the part at the end, I'm might die because of this curiosity! After all, curiosity killed the cat :O

Meow.

(xD Guess what? I made an account! Yes, I'm wasting your time telling you this. But- I thought you should know to expect my next reviews to have an assigned account. Cheers! :D)

You are a cruel, cruel person...and I am loving every minute of it! 8D Normally in these Whitebeard fics, there's not a whole lot of waiting until the crew appears. I can kinda understand wanting to get to the fun part of the story of having the Whiteboards interacting with ASL but at the same time it's a little disappointing. Whiteboard really has no reason to be hanging out anywhere near Dawn Island and I don't think Shanks would have hung out there for so long if it was part of Whitebeard's territory or something. It might be a bit more difficult (or a lot more difficult probably) but introducing Whitebeard further down the road and giving the crew a proper Big Damn Entrance will be sooo much more satisfying in the end. :3 I can't wait to see the next chapter! So excited! :3

PS: Is that Mini-Mihawk chatting with Zeff? 8D Love it!
PPS: Sorry about the ear infections. :( Those suck majorly. I once had an infection that was so bad that it actually made me cry cause it hurt so bad. My meds eventually helped but that sucker took a while to go away. Can't imagine how frustrating and awkward a double ear infection must be. :/

Oh god, feel over load. Happy n sad. Awesome chapter!

Sanji and Zeff! Tho I don't know who the guy Zeff is talking to... Any hints?

First off, my guess for the people at the end of the chappy is Zeff and Thatch. :D
;v; Yes, we cry together. That chapter really SABOtaged my feels, Oda RAYLEIGH needs to stop that. x'D Jk, Oda writes greatness, we can't deny it. He totally ACEd that chapter. (x'D I'm done, I'm done! Hold your frying pans!) He does need to stop hurting the ASL trio though, it hurts us fans too!
:'D The extra update was awesome 'n really improved my day, thanks for that! I thank your Beta as well~
I like where this is headed! Go Ace, Sabo, go and save Luffy! :D
(xD Btw, I've found Kyoudai and it's pure epicness and punches me with happy feels. I face an internal civil war keeping my happy noises quiet while reading in public. I'm mentioning it here because I'm too lazy to review over there right now, feel free to slap me. xD)

I loved the chapter! THANKIES for the early update! I'm going to guess that that was Thatch talking to Zeff and the eggplant was Sanji? Can't wait for the next update!

Awwwwwwwww! All the sad cuteness! Oooo, and a mystery ending. XD
I'm sorry you're sick, but I totally would have been the guy with the .

I love this story I can't wait for the next update
Just a guess but is it Rayleigh talking to Zeff while waiting for shakky?

No matter how many times I read this chapter, Ace and Sabo's teasing always makes me giggle! And that's so needed after all they've been through. And have I thanked you yet today for saving Sabo? xD

Is it Thatch? I have a feeling it's him, but I could be wrong. However, if it is him, I'm going to be so excited! Anyway, I can't wait for more of your story and I'm sorry to hear about your double ear infection. That must have been really horrible!

-Oh, wow, you updated so fast that I didn’t even get a chance to collect my thoughts and leave a review on your last chapter! So I’ll just say here that it was really great before moving onto this chapter’s review!

-Iva-san is really cool, and it was sweet of Sabo to want to extend his thanks to Dragon.

-Aw… Even though this is a really bad situation right now, it’s still really sweet to see how much Sabo and Ace care about Luffy and how guilty they feel about what Luffy’s last memories of them are. _

-To be fair, I’m pretty sure that the people who were living right next to the wall really didn’t have a clue what was going on with the fire, and even if they had wanted to help people it probably wouldn’t have been safe to open the gates for very long. But, yeah, Sabo is right. The Dawn Island nobles suck. Except for Sabo, but since he doesn’t consider himself a noble, he doesn’t count as belonging in that category.

-Oh… I teared up when Ace said that they were going to send Dadan a letter once they found Luffy. That’s so heartwarming…! It was quite the balm to the heartbreak Sabo’s speech gave me just before that.

-“That means you’re the fun one!” I laughed out loud at that line, and the rest of those lines in their exchange. It’s probably true, too. Unfortunately, Ace, the cowboy hat you were in canon has nowhere near the authority Sabo’s hat does. Which reminds, me, are they going to try and find Sabo a new top hat? Because his last one got kind of burned.

-Sabo is a master of manipulation.

-…Hold on, is that chef Zeff and Sanji? Or Rayleigh? Because that would be really cool!

-Nice work on this! I look forward to more!

-Catflower Queen

-P.S. I hope your ear feels better soon!

The only chef with a sword I know is Thatch - at least that what everyone assumes he is with his outfit :) I guess little eggplant is messing around below. And annoying Zeff. Thank your for this sudden update. I can't wait until next week!

It is getting very interesting continueeeeeeee

My poor baby sabo! Q.Q thank goodness they ran into dragon so they can actually rest and plan about what to do next :) im so ready for more ace and sabo love! XD they really need it right about now...i just hope little luffy'll be alright in the meantime T_T and im guessing dragon decided to help because he heard luffy's name :D but he must be so confused at the moment like "What?! Since when did I have 2 other kids?! O.o" XD im really curious to see how this turns out now :D awesome chapter, cant wait for the next one!

Great start off to this story, makes me curious to see where it will go! :D
-Also thank you for informing me of the emotional punch to the gut that is chapter 794 ~ *screams internally*-
Anyways great job and I look forward to the next update ;)