|Reviews for Dark Archangel|
| Blake2020 chapter 2 . 5/18
| Blake2020 chapter 1 . 5/18
| Keiko Braginski chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
He. sounds. so. HOT!
| galacticpink chapter 3 . 7/5/2009
Ah, so it is Kari's Angewomon. I'm confused as to how she became Angewomon if the events surrounding Wizardmon's death didn't happen.
Ah well, you did say AU. I'll use that as an explanation. XD
| galacticpink chapter 2 . 7/5/2009
I'm a little confused. Is this Kari's Angewomon, or a different one? When dealing with Digimon it is often important to specify. Since you've already gone AU with your story, I don't know whether to assume it is Kari and T.K.'s Digimon or a different Angewomon and Angemon. It could be really important in the plot later.
AngeMyotismon seemed to "know her" like it was Kari's Angewomon, but her evolution was a result of the events surrounding Wizardmon's death, or "reconfigure" as you put it in your story.
Other than that the chapter is good, although I think I liked the first chapter more. I'd suggest you clarified whether Angewomon and Angemon are the Digidestined's partners or just some random Angewomon and Angemon.
| galacticpink chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
You have absolutely wonderful imagery here. I stumble over the dub terms, but luckily I know the terms from the first season very well and can get past them (I prefer and remember better the original terms ie. Vamdemon, Wizarmon, Tailmon etc). The quality of writing makes up for the dub terms.
Like I said, super vivid. You've done will with portraying Myotismon's personality and I can clearly see Wizardmon's expressions and the like.
I won't "fave" it due to the use of dub terms (the "Ultimate" level really trips my mind as in Japan it is called Perfect and "Mega" is actually the Ultimate level), but I do plan on reading it all and commenting.
| animatedrose chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Crazy story! Myo turned into Angemyo? Weird! i love this story! You must update update update! _!
| Whiteling chapter 10 . 1/10/2007
That was a great story! The love story is deep and beautiful.
| Merklin chapter 10 . 3/6/2006
I loved this story, it was awesome, i can't wait to read it's sequels. The only thing i didn't like was that he didn't become Angemyotismon again, that would have been awesome, i was wondering, would you mind if i make an attempt at drawing him? it may not be any good, but i'll do my best, lol. Anywho, the concept of this story was great. Combine Angemon and Myotismon to make someone truly awesome, the fact that you combined my two all time favorite digimon helps, of course. But yeah, great concept, i hope the sequels are just as good! Reply if you want to, if not, i understand, you're busy.
| xfirexfalconx chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
O_O Wow...love it. _ -adds-
| Marie chapter 10 . 5/13/2005
WOW! THIS IS THE MOST AMZING EVER!
YOU'RE A GENIUS!
| BeatlesLover chapter 10 . 12/23/2004
oh wow. this is such a good fic! i love it so much!
| Adalia Glenys chapter 10 . 7/10/2004
I've read a number of your stories and enjoyed them very much! Myotismon is one of my favorite Digimon, and I'm glad to see so many excellent ideas about him explored! In fact, you're on my favorite authors list.
I would suggest, though, that you put down your thesaurus and pick up your dictionary more often; your use of words such as "admonished" ranges from inappropriate to the setting, to utterly incorrect.
| Perosha chapter 10 . 7/9/2003
*dances* Who! Myo survived one of Jenny's stories! This deserves a party, or a pizza...or maybe some Evanescence tickets. *pokes Jenny's rich friend with stick* D
I enjoyed this story, as always, because your work is just entertaining like that. Happy ending good. Whoo. _ Um, random thoughts...
- Draw Myo in his DA outfit! Pwease? *puppy eyes*
- "YOU ASININE CRETIN OF AN ANALYZER! WHERE'S THE RELEVANT INFORMATION WHEN YOU NEED IT?" XD! That is so wonderfully Izzy; it made me laugh out loud.
- Ph34r the R3n4 of d00m! ) Gotta love the random fangirl violence. It was great. _
- Angemon being Myotismon's bodyguard...That is so randomly ironic...but in a good way. )
- Too much random stuff to point out, really. Me like story. .~
OK...Every silver cloud has a critiquing lining, as some famous person never said, so here's the thought I decided to save for now: Though your style is nicely descriptive and wonderful to read because of it, it sometimes puts a damper on things. You never -vary-, keeping the descriptivity even when it would do much better and make a scene more powerful to be sparce or even fragmented. (Stephen King in particular is an excellent example of how to properly manipulate sentence fragments.) While I realize you aren't writing horror stories here and that everybody loves exercising their vocabulary, the full-bodied style tends to distance me during scenes that ought to draw the reader in closer. It's great most of the time, but to me it kind of hurts scenes that require sharp drama. I'm not saying your writing is bad or anything - I'm just saying that it would do you well to fluctuate styles and patterns every now and then, when a desired effect would be enhanced by doing so. On a similar note, some of your dialogue is painfully expository (ex. the second paragraph of Angewomon's explanation of what happened to Myotismon). When people (or angels) are scared, hurt, and confused, they do not use many adjectives and tend to be more succinct than she was. To paint a mental picture for the reader of AngeMyotismon's reverse transformation, you probably should have used some method other than Angewomon, or at least woven more of her attitude into her words (pauses, fumbling for words, shock, etc.) It was like she was reciting something for a grade. This isn't the only instance of expository dialogue, of course, but it's the most prominent in the chapter. It's something I've noticed before and might even have commented on, so I apologize if I'm repeating myself, but it does catch my attention.
That's really all I wanted to say critique-wise. I'd elaborate but these FF.N review boxes are irritatingly finite; they won't even remotely suggest when you've exceeded your word limit...you could miss out on reading this part I'm typing right now and I'd never know until it was too late. Argh. So, I take my leave of you and await you next story. Myo takes on the future...and Davis's noodles. Bwaha. 8-D
| Avalon9 chapter 10 . 7/8/2003
WHOO nice story, sorry for not reviewing much. But u did a great job, can't wait for more storys!