Reviews for Chaos
tinyRyan117 chapter 2 . 7/16/2015
Nicely done. A very poetic manner in how it was worded and written. So far I like it a lot. Only criticisms that come to mind are some in correct words. For example chapter two it says for 'perhaps is was for the best' other than that it's good. Keep it up.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
who is the talker? the betrayed? or the investigator?