Reviews for Temptation
Princess.B.Saber31 chapter 11 . 8/13/2016
Could you update this please I wanna know how Helga is going to dump Jonathan.
Lena2244 chapter 3 . 2/14/2012
Thats jus evil, evily GREAT
Sandra Strickland chapter 11 . 3/3/2011
I know you have left this story long back, but I've recently discover it and it would be great if you continue it. It was really good. See you
cheetahkit chapter 11 . 11/24/2009
continue already!
jaxxxc chapter 5 . 11/13/2007
omg you said Dear Googaly moogaly was he cute.

wtf wtfwtf
blackangel94 chapter 11 . 11/29/2005
ok fist when i read the summary, i didnt like it but i decided to check it out and your story ROCKS!

PLEASE right more
io chapter 4 . 6/23/2005
Cheetah Princess chapter 11 . 8/7/2004
great story! update soon! please!
bootyliciousbabe69 chapter 11 . 6/27/2004
i love this story so far, i cant wait till you update it some more, this th by far the best story that i have read all day, and o have read quite a few!
LadyInWriting chapter 11 . 6/24/2004
to lila! lol great update, keep up the good work i can't wait to read the next one!
ni9htdreame12 chapter 10 . 6/15/2004
more please! update soon. oh yea and make helga kick jonathon's ass! lol.
The Court Jester of Chyron CG chapter 10 . 6/15/2004
Dear Sir:

I wish to protest in the strongest possible terms the authour's treatmen of people with the name Johnathan, including any other way that the name can be spelled. I happen to know a few Johnathans, and none that I know would go out with a girl who wears a massive amount of makeup.
Pointy Objects chapter 10 . 6/14/2004
I liked the other chapter, but I like this one too. Keep writing!
morgannia chapter 10 . 6/14/2004
ok, so maybe Arnold is a little OOC, there nothing terribly wrong with that, lol. As long as he is constitantly within the context of the story, i think it's fine & your plot twists are really funny. can't wait for the next chapter.
iluvarnold chapter 10 . 6/13/2004
nice job on this, funny. kg
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