|Reviews for Essential|
| BlueWriter69 chapter 1 . 11/12/2017
The story is great but there's two things that keep knocking me in the head. The fact that Amy decided to not tell Shadow about their child and the fact that Amy said no when Shadow said he wanted to spend time with their son. Now don't get me wrong there are many, and i mean many, reasons as to why a mother wouldn't tell the father about their child. The mother may want to protect the child from the father who was an abusive man, the mother knew that the father was not going to help her raise the child, the mother hate the father and refuse to let her child see him let alone know about him-ya get the picture?
However with Amy i just can't see a reason as to why she didn't tell him. She knew that he would take care of her and their son, she knew that he has a nice paying job, she knew he wasn't a jackass, so why didn't she tell him? Because she felt weak? That's not really a good excuse in my opinion.
Now to the part where she said no when Shadow wanted to spend time with their son. Amy should've say yes or I'll think about it when Shadow said he wanted to spend time cause he already found out that Dusk was his son. That there alone showed that Shadow wanted to help take care of him, if not that then the fact that Shadow was willing to go to court should've showed Amy that Shadow was damn serious about this.
I'm not saying Amy isn't a good mother, she raised Dusk with help from Vi, she found a good paying job to provide for her son, and she spend time with him, all good things in a single mother. However when it came to the whole father thing i think she could've handle it better. Her fears of feeling weak got in the way.
Other then these two things the story is wonderful and very sweet with the father and son bonding time.
| kendra hilferty chapter 1 . 3/30/2016
Cute loved it
| TheTruthCritic chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
Are you ever going to come back and write another full length story? You are actually another one of the good notorious sonic writers around here. Can't you see this fandom is lacking good story telling? Please come back, for fucks' sake, come back. I really enjoyed this story for once. It's hard to find good fanfics on here.
| Lucy The Husky chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
Awwww! Love this! You are an awesome writer! I'm your ultimate fan! Really, amazing job! Hope you keep writing here! Sorry if my pm made you mad or something. I won't do it ( not without your permission) anyways! I think I'm done! xD chaoo ;D
| stephanieespinoza845 chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
That was amazing. So glad you didn't stop writing. As always amazing work you're very talented I do hope you do not stop.
| Dj Shadowthehedgehog0201 chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
"sniff" Such an amazing story. And by amzing I mean AMAZING. Ur such an awesome author and i hope to see more stories from u in da future
| GabbyJ chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Great story. Followed your fics for years, so good to see some new stuff from you. Hope you keep writing. xxx
| ThePurplePyroHedgie chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Really cute story! I was glad to see a new story from you, it's been awhile. Hope to see more in the future possibly! :)
| aliciathewolf45 chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
Awww! This was so adorable! I love all tie one shots and stories XD I hope I get to see another!
| xXAmberAddilynRoseXx chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
This was amazing! I really enjoyed reading it. It's different from other Shadamy fanfics and was very interseting.
I've read all of your past fanfics and their all great! I hope you start making more soon, because you are an excellent writer! :)