this started of as a very intersting story and concept, but its turned into a direction i wasn't really expecting or wanted, i'm disappointed but i'll keep reading because its not bad, different but not bad.

why would snape reveal remus if he's brewing monksbane for him

I feel as though people who write Hermione like this don't actually like Hermione, she's a constant irritant.

Am I supposed to just suspend by intelligence and every thing else that happened previously for this chapter? A very lazy chapter, very lazy writing.

Didn't they learn wingardium leviosa on Halloween in the books? Sorely they'd do something less complicated on their first day like lumos or something, no?

I had to almost groan a bit at the portmanteau reference to Sherlock Holmes’ residence at 221b Baker Street from Sir Arthur Conan Doyle’s novels :). This is a pretty interesting story so far.

Imagine waxing poetically like that, and then just abandoning the story again. You're a joke.

I think it might be interesting for Harry to have that ability :D It would allow for a lot of interesting things. Although, you've probably made the decision by now, given the chapter count " Ah! Also, I've noticed that you seem to neglect a bit of punctuation here and there :0 as well as not necessarily choosing the best word every now and again. It's just a tiny nitpick I have, and since this is already pretty much written, (although I'm not sure if it's complete; I'd have to check), it's not likely that you'll change anything " Aside from that, I've been enjoying this a lot so far :D

Lease update again soon

Enjoying the story thanks

This story started out with a very interesting perspective, decent grammar and clever dialogues with a pinch of healthy funny humor. From smart interesting Harry, competent characters to idiot savant Harry to just plain idiot Harry and what feels like slapstick humor. Then comes the borderline pedophilia and annoying anime animal turned cute ditzy girl troupe with even more borderline pedophilia or is it bestiality? And its progressively worst, the characters becomes caricatures and how does a 11 year old Harry go from independent and smart to willfully stupid in just a few year isn’t a character supposed to be growing smarter with age not the other way around. This is so disappointing and the continued deus ex machina salvation plots that he keeps bungle into and then solve miraculously without any rhyme or reason. From super Harry that beat more than a dozen adult wizards to whiny wimpish Harry the next chapter, the roller-coaster is baffling and I’m frankly tired of trying to read this borderline personality story.

Updaaaaate please

yea this is a bit to over the top for me

Glad to have seen two new chapters after my hiatus of reading fanfiction. There certainly is a quality difference between the latest two chapters and earlier ones. Take your time to recharge and don't rush it. It's always a pleasure to read something new from you.

Keep it up.

Its been a few chapters, so wth is Dumbledore doing about the Sirius case?!