Reviews for Barefoot
Nyx028 chapter 7 . 4/12/2022
Its been a few chapters, so wth is Dumbledore doing about the Sirius case?!
fatandsquat chapter 23 . 3/24/2022
"Y-yes my readers, i assure you that Sirius buying playwitch mansion is vital to the story, very important, just like the role of Hermione"
Son of Vesta 16 - 2nd Account chapter 56 . 3/24/2022
Don't be so hard on yourself, this story was simply amazing! A brilliant read, and it kept me busy and entertained for quite a few months. For anyone who hasn't read this story yet, they definitely should! This is an incredibly unique story with so many different parts, and some themes which might become a cliché in the future, because of this story!

So yea, thank you VERY VERY much for writing this story. I dearly hope that this story will one day resurface, and if not, I am still astounded by how good this story actually is. Really, the best read I've had in a while.

Yours,

- No. 16
TBWL713 chapter 22 . 3/22/2022
This story started out so perfect. It was unique and well thought out. It seems that you ran out of content in regards to Harry's abilities. He could have been called away constantly to help the Aurors or the Goblins to help identify artefacts. You made such a good Harry and Dumbledore relationship, they could have investigated his powers or travelled the world. There were so many good directions this could go. Instead you:
-Introduced a 19-year-old dating a 13-year-old. Pedophilic. I don't care if his Animagus makes him look 14, it's still not any better. -Put Hermione in nearly every scene. It was so much better when it was him doing projects alone rather than having Hermione follow him around everywhere questioning him about everything. And he just tells her everything, she is so damn annoying.

Also, I read ahead in the comments and have seen that you make Hedwig into a bird-girl... wtf. Bye.
TBWL713 chapter 21 . 3/21/2022
I hate how he tells Hermione everything. She is so damn annoying and stuffy.
TBWL713 chapter 20 . 3/21/2022
Hermione is still annoying and Tonks is a pedo.
TBWL713 chapter 18 . 3/21/2022
Hermione is annoying, Harry's death scene was funny. Don't know why Harry would reveal his Parseltongue ability during the dueling club when Albus had already advised him to keep it a secret.
TBWL713 chapter 13 . 3/21/2022
I love Harry and Dumbledore's relationship. One of the best I've seen. Just chilling out in Dumbledore's office lol.
TBWL713 chapter 11 . 3/21/2022
Personally, I like it much more seeing the results of Harry's work rather than seeing what he sees. It gives me Sherlock Holmes vibes.
TBWL713 chapter 8 . 3/21/2022
Harry could be a literal god if he touched the Elder Wand. For 800 years, the Elder Wand has been used by some very powerful wizards, likely using insane magic. Antioch Peverell, Emeric the Evil, Gregorovitch, Grindelwald and Dumbledore. Not only that, he'd be able to see how the Hallows were made... Love the potential of this concept.
TBWL713 chapter 5 . 3/21/2022
Really interesting concept and, so far, it has been well executed.
NaaBe chapter 2 . 3/6/2022
Does Harry imbibing the knowledge of his parent's wands also means he has all the knowledge of the different spells and can do them as he matures?
OneX004 chapter 56 . 2/17/2022
Take all the time you need. And when you return I’ll be here. This story truly has been more than an experience. It has been an inspiration.
billiebanners chapter 11 . 2/9/2022
SHERLOCK REFERNCE SHERLOCK REFERENCE
cindyliu.hoo chapter 56 . 1/30/2022
this is great. i know it’s on hiatus, but if you ever even have the thought of “maybe i should start writing barefoot again,” please please please do it. not for us (okay, maybe a little for us) but do it because you grew to love it and want to write so we can know what harry finds out in the slytherin common room about tom riddle!
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