Wow, well done. I have acquired the taste of. OCs but sometimes it’s hard to find good characters with well written stories so . Are you going to have Kana find out who they really are?(powers and everything) I think that’s be interesting. Good luck with your writing!

I sincerely encourage you to keep writing. You have a really good thing going here and that's rare to find. I look forward to reading more.

i love the last few lines at the end of this chapter! so glad you updated otherwise i would have never found this story! keep up the good work!

That was cute!

I really like your oc kana she sounds lovely!

Please update! I really love this fanfic

This is such a beautiful story!
But i feel so much sadness from Kana. Thnak you for the update :)

I'm very interested in your story and I really really hope that you will continue someday .

I've noticed that you portray Kana as this beautiful, easy going character who always seems to be smiling and laughing at everything, but there's this hidden and subtle underlying darkness to her. Those are my favorite types of characters and if built on right it can make an amazing story. I really hope you aren't one of those writers that makes their characters fall in love in like 3 chapters and then have your OC spill all her dark secrets as soon as she falls in love with him. I really like this mystery about her and I hope you keep up the pace :)

OMG KANA IS SO COOL! IM SO HAPPY YOU FINALLY INTRODUCED THEM FORMALLY. AND I HOPE THEIR RELATIONSHIP WILL GROW. PLEASE UPDATE!

literally bless u for not throwing Anna aside i love how so in depth she is portrayed into this fanfic so far and i hope you continue to do that

i really like how you started the story introducing anna instead of going straight to mikoto. I hope you really build on their relationship

this is actually really interesting, even tho it was only the first chapter and it wasn't much, i still really enjoyed it and can't wait to read more

Update soon

I will agree with you that the K fandom on here is smaller than some, but it's not too terrible. You should definitely continue this, because I also believe that a fandom cannot grow without those to push it to a start. Plus, I found the beginning of your story quite intriguing and I would really like to read of these big plans you have for it. The writing was fresh and light, so you're off to a great start. Plus you seem to have some favorites and a follow and that will only grow the further along your story goes. Don't give up on this piece! I'll be waiting for the next chapter to see what happens with Kana, and of course, her life with Mikoto and HOMRA. Keep up the great work!