Angryowl please do remastered version of A Simple Teenage Shop Owner fanfic

one of my top ten stories ive had the privilege to read and enjoy. thank you very much

Is there a sequel to this story?

I love this story. Romance between Naruto, Koneko and Ophis are amazing.

removing the firt lemon. Yet not touching the others.
Cowardly.

Why'd you edit out the lasst Lemon?

No! Why!
WHY DID YOU REMOVE THE LEMON! NO! NO! WHERE IS IT! WHERE IS IT!?

Naruto is too passive and dare I say submissive in this fic. He let's people walk all over him as if he has no self worth. Rias tried to erase his memories of the woman he loved and he let her walk away. Koneko slapped him for keeping his past from her while she was doing the same. It's not a bad fic, just not for me. I'm not interested in super simp submissive Naruto.

Are you going to rewrite this chapter or the story and put the lemons scenes back? Or are you going to open an AO3 account and put all of the lemons scenes there.

Una historia muy interesante

w fanfic

Naruto should technically be a god. He has all nine bijuu and you mentioned Kurama having the rennigan in the early chapters. True seeker orbs would be able to earse all things and they negate durability hax.

Candy, nature and death? Wouldn’t that technically make him the god of diabetes?

Given they’re both nine-tailed foxes, I’m a little surprised Kurama didn’t noticeably react to Yasaka.

Yin-Yang chakra? Another way to phrase that would be Alpha-Omega chakra. And that has… implications… when it comes to Excalibur.