Reviews for A Simple Teenage Shop Owner
Diametrik chapter 25 . 7/22
Somehow, the premise of this story seems to have flipped on its head. It started out as a bunch of strong people and faction leaders coming to ask him to help them, and he tells them to fuck off because he wants to run his candy shop and enjoy life with Koneko, using his superior strength and skill to refuse them. Now it seems to be the opposite: a bunch of strong people and faction leaders coming to ask him to help them and he agrees because he feels bad for them or something. It's like Naruto caved in and lost the battle to keep doing what he wants.
Diametrik chapter 9 . 7/22
Naruto: *has a good explanation for this*
Michael: *can tell whether someone is lying*
Naruto: "I have a good explanation for this"
Michael: "your punishment for lying is death!"

Okay buddy
obama's ovary chapter 4 . 6/30
why did you edit out the lemon if the events still happen?. This makes the first time of the two seem less important and that it was just a simple thing that doesn't effect their relationship
dkainallen chapter 9 . 6/22
how fucking stupid
leoamaatodos chapter 42 . 6/17
Que hermosa historiaQue el pan le acompaƱe
blacklightning18 chapter 25 . 6/9
hero faction my ass if they are going kidnapped people from their home
blacklightning18 chapter 24 . 6/9
it seems naruto can't catch a single break can he
blacklightning18 chapter 21 . 6/8
asia is like combined of naruto, sakura and hinata
blacklightning18 chapter 20 . 6/8
ophis in young girl form with naruto make scene of little sister and big brother eating ice cream together
blacklightning18 chapter 19 . 6/8
issei make dress break remind me of naruto make sexy no jutsu,i pretty sure koneko didn't want share naruto with kuroka, i pretty sure naruto will beat up issei with inch of his life if he found out about issei using dress break on his girlfriend koneko clothes and i feel sorry for naruto at dealing with karen women
blacklightning18 chapter 18 . 6/8
xenovia excalibur destruction sword remind me both of zabuza kubikiribocho and kisame samehada sword and naruto resting excalibur destruction sword against his shoulder like kisame does with samehada
blacklightning18 chapter 17 . 6/8
why people must trying to ruin naruto happiness, hey man i'm blacklightning19 because i turn 19 in age and can you write a story for me about naruto acting like koneko older brother and protect her from perverts please i will be happy if you did
blacklightning18 chapter 2 . 6/8
vali remind naruto of himself with his attitude
blacklightning18 chapter 14 . 6/7
vali remind naruto of himself with his attitude
blacklightning18 chapter 12 . 6/7
yoo did naruto just using the same move he use against kiba in chunin exam on hercules, kuroka are naruto sister in law by dating koneko, looks like naruto are punishing yubellune for trying killing his sweet ko-chan and the armle koneko wearing are summoning seal
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