| Reviews for A Simple Teenage Shop Owner |
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   Simply Natural chapter 1 . 12/3 Ya know I'm gonna read the entirety of this story because I found the initial author’s note funny |
| insanecoop chapter 9 . 12/2 Poor situational writing imo. You had an accident and ended up here, let me put a slave collar on your neck ... right...by angels no less. I'm out. 3/10 |
| John chapter 2 . 12/2 John |
| CHILD PORN chapter 1 . 9/28 Hello fellow pedos. I sell child pornography, ten videos for one dollar. Method of payment is via PAYPAL. You can choose any video you want in the catalog that will be provided to you. I have pedomom, rape, anal, oral etc. And if you enter my Telegram account saying that you come from fanfiction, I will give away pedophile photos of little girls naked and having sex for free. Visit my Telegram channel: Master777vip0000 Q5 |
| Salvadorrojo66 chapter 17 . 7/21 This manga is a harem type. Where is the harem for Naruto? |
| Sweet Kagamine Kiss chapter 43 . 7/14 Binge read from start to end. I very much enjoyed every single chapter. |
| Sweet Kagamine Kiss chapter 4 . 7/13 Have you ever thought to crossroad this to ao3? That way any lemony scenes can be intact while the FFN version can be censored... |
| Tecnop10 chapter 12 . 7/9 Hercules is Roman, Greek is Heracles (Google traductor) |
| thomascastillo9987 chapter 42 . 6/16 more! |
| thomascastillo9987 chapter 28 . 6/15 eeeeeeeeeeeeee |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/12 Yeah I’m dipping on this story, he’s toying with his opponents gets really annoying when it if the same thing over and over again also the fast “he is against killing” a couple of paragraphs above and now he is trying to kill riser idk man I think you are trying to stick to close to canon naruto but also trying to do your own thing and it isn’t working out. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/12 I know this is an old story but what is the point of Naruto having all the tailed beast in him if he doesn’t use them so far? Technically he is a pseudo 10 tail host, I don’t know if it’s because you didn’t want to make him overly powerful or what not but it’s your story you can do whatever you want. To all those that are complaining about this not being Naruto or how his power isn’t even that great let me just remind you that throughout the whole Naruto series he only ever had half of Kuramas chakra and he still beat Sasuke was using all of the tailed beast chakra (naruto wasn’t even going for the kill unlike sasuke) also this is a FAN FICTION it doesn’t have to be canon at all since it’s on a fan fiction website good story so far though |
| SMB chapter 10 . 6/6 It's f**king garbage. Idiotruto is intentionally nerfing himself so that he fits into the current power levels. He fought people and beings far more powerful than the garbage characters in DXD, and he's intentionally sandbagging, just so they have a chance against him. F**k you. Like, literally. F**k you. |
| SMB chapter 4 . 6/6 F**k you. Why would you leave in the warnings and the lemon start notice, then delete the f**king lemon and leave another note stating it? Is your editor a f**king moRon? I think he is a f**king moRon. DELETE THE NOTICES AND WARNINGS, YOU F**KING MORON! With no scene, why are they still there? To annoy people that wanted it and you cockblocked them! |
| SMB chapter 2 . 6/6 Why the f**k didn't Naruto say Rias tried to brainwash him and make him forget about Catloli? Why the f**k didn't you finish the scene from their meeting? WTF happened? Did they fight? Did they leave? Did she suck Naruto's dick as an apology? WHAT THE F**K HAPPENED? |