his a fucking pussy hate this fic

If you want to read a story about someone constantly bending over, taking it up the ass, whining and complaining about it and then doing nothing as it happens over and over and over again, then you'll absolutely LOVE this worthless piece of shit story.

It took about 2 days to read the story and I'm glad I did! You did good work! I do hope you give the fanfiction writing another go though, you do have some talent for it

WHY?! WHY REMOVE THE LEMON?! Please! I beg you! BRING BACK THE LEMON! If you're worried about those pussies telling you koneko is underage, highschool DXD, the literal source material, sexualize her and younger characters. Besides, it's a FANFICTION ffs! So please, I beg you! WRITE THE GODDAMN LEMON!

would be a pretty good story if there wasn't such a prevalent sexaul bias towards child like character as love interests

dropped. would be better if there is no issei, im not a fan of ntr so this is not for me, if you are into ntr, or fine with it then its a good read. the story is actually quite good

Asshole, if you went to the trouble of writing the lemon then leave it in. Please!

if you're going to kill off all of Naruto girlfriends like the last fanfic just fuck off and die bastard. one story with that much tragedy is enough

...if I read it right, Sirzechs wasn't actually a threat to naruto. and Michael is at best his equal. so, how did he take naruto prisoner?

also, I probably would have broken a few of Michael's bones on general principle before escaping.

interesting so far, but I can't help but think it would have been funny if naruto had immediately ended the fight by sealing Ophis inside of him, and for her to come too, only to see the 9 biju and simply say, "well, fuck."

yeah, with all 9 biju inside him, I doubt many outside of Ophis are much of a threat to him.

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Ahahhahahahha Naruto is just trying to work on his shop and live his life and every single faction is flocking to him it's hialrious

Thanks for your great historia and style...

I'm done with this. I kept reading from some mistaken hope that Naruto, as a character, will gain some agency. He's just a rag doll for the narrative.