Reviews for A Simple Teenage Shop Owner
Difdi chapter 25 . 3/17
Given they’re both nine-tailed foxes, I’m a little surprised Kurama didn’t noticeably react to Yasaka.
Difdi chapter 18 . 3/16
Yin-Yang chakra? Another way to phrase that would be Alpha-Omega chakra. And that has… implications… when it comes to Excalibur.
Guest chapter 44 . 3/14
Pls next cap
mst3ktoo chapter 26 . 2/20
I want to see an interlude from the point of view of one of uzumaki's customers.
Horkiou chapter 1 . 2/12
Hahahaha don't be so hard on yourself I reread this story like 12 times lol you write this when you were just beginning to write so it's ok to make mistakes
Markan999 chapter 9 . 2/10
Michael shouldn't be that idiot, I mean, he is someone that just fought Ophis and come out uninjured and he tought he could imprisoned him that easy?
Grue chapter 44 . 1/24
You know, for a naruto self insert dxd wish fullfilment fanfic, this was kinda good. Also Koneko best girl.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/6
Naruto the coward. Not interested in a stupid cowardly naruto story. When someone attacks you and tries to kill you without just cause, you out that enemy down hard.
SomeDudeWithNoLife chapter 44 . 1/3
Hell yea! Youre back!
OJ chapter 44 . 12/31/2023
Nice that you coming back and Happy New year
Master777vip0000 chapter 1 . 12/31/2023
MY REAL NAME IS:
Gina Gail Barron-Goodman

FIND ME AT:
126 Ambrosia Lane
Heath, Texas 75032

E-MAIL ME AT:
ginagbg at sbcglobal dot net

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midnightscar17 chapter 44 . 12/31/2023
I thought the story was great. Also funny in some parts
mac1010 chapter 13 . 12/26/2023
WHY THE FUCK DOES HE PUT UP WITH THIS SHIT
JUST FUCKING BEAT THEM ALL UP
OR JUST FLARE YOURE CHAKRA AND MAKE THEM FEEL FEAR. FUCK THIS IS ANNOYING
Kitsukage9 chapter 44 . 12/26/2023
glad to see you are back, not gonna lie i yelled "yes, it finally updated" out loud while on break at work when i saw this in my notifications.
Hendrie9870 chapter 44 . 12/25/2023
Glad you that you are getting back to this fic again.
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