Reviews for A Simple Teenage Shop Owner |
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AizenTheGoat chapter 2 . 7/12/2015 Good chapter. I like how koneko was actually pissed and didn't just let it go. So since naruto has his power does that mean he has his truth seeking balls? Also I'd like to know will naruto get along with azazel since he's sort of like jiraiya in a sense? |
darkmaelstrom456 chapter 2 . 7/12/2015 Nice chapter can't wait for the next one |
the unsung antihero chapter 1 . 7/12/2015 Wow... Just wow... Honestly this was more than I expected, aside from a few errors in grammar/spelling (I have ocd I'm not being a smart ass, I can't help but point things out and overreact to slight changes) this story has me hooked, I do have a few questions but I will simply pm you on those. |
The Mega Swordsmen chapter 2 . 7/12/2015 I am really glad that you made this strictly Koneko x Naruto. I have read too many stories where the author says "Yeah this is totally going to be strictly Guy x Girl", and then a few chapters later "So yeah this is going to be a harem now with like 20 girls". With this fic you have given me a smile :) |
darkanomoly chapter 1 . 7/11/2015 I love it already. A cliché yet also unique backstory. I sense a bit of influence from Bleach. |
MrTwistr chapter 1 . 7/11/2015 Yea! I love Koneko. Lolirific! |
Beeswax2 chapter 1 . 7/11/2015 This HAS to be THE most entertaining and different DXD story I've ever seen! I'm eagerly awaiting more. |
ThePersonNamedJuxt chapter 1 . 7/11/2015 This my man is the most interesting story ever. |
Orchamus chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 Now this looks awesome, such a great start, no having to wait for the relationship to develop past attraction to real feelings and then become a couple, Naruto and Koneko being a couple means we can skip right to the interesting developing relationship dynamics, watching as the feelings grow ever more and are tested by their lots in life and their, more like Koneko's, obligations. Wonder how she'll react when she finds out about this? Heh. |
Kitan chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 Nice start to the story. Hope you update it soon |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 Can there be Issei bashing? I hate that guy |
T-B-R chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 Pretty good story, I wasn't to sure about it at first but you nailed it, its very well done. |
Heliosion chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 A truly brilliant and fresh idea! Looking forward to more soon! |
ddcj1990 chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 Awesome first chapter I like it |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 Keep going dude this story is great so far. |