Reviews for A Simple Teenage Shop Owner
Kronvarln chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
This is really well written, I encourage you to continue writing this story. This is really good as a story like this that has only a single pairing hasn't really been done while in the Naruto/Highschool DxD crossovers. It is normally either 2 girls or a harem of them. This is a nice change of pace to what the rest of the stories are.

Anyway, stay amazing and Peace Out

Kronvarln
Aquos dragon chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Love the story it's adorable and I wouldn't mind if it's a single pairing but if it's a harem I wouldn't mind at all, looking forward to the next chapter :)
darkmaelstrom456 chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Nice chapter
Random Reader chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Finally, a fresh idea! And an interesting one as well! All you need is a beta to go over some grammar and word placement, and you'll be golden!
Zero chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Just have to ask is koneko only with naruto or will her sister join in it because it would be funny if they fight for him and naruto can help populate there species.
Jebest4781 chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
It's been a while since your updates and this story is really great
ThePizziaMan chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
This is pretty cute. Please have this be a single paring story:)
douglas654 chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
I love the way you are going with this already I really want to read more of what you got planned into this story cause I know this is one that I could just sit down and read again and again I love how you are pairing him with Koneko cause I don't think that there are enough good ones with that pairing out there I know that it is one of my most favorite crossover pairings only beaten by Naruto/Asia. And making Rias and Akeno test him is a pretty cool idea I don't see much fanfictions doing that and I can't wait to see what you have him do to prove himself
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
ohhh curious to see how it goes :D
ChaosIzanagiNoOokami chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
great chapter. the plot is excellent there is no grammar errors. showing that you are a great writer.
LL chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Naruto feel Rias energy as powerful? please Rias is about powerful as a chunin level ninja I would say and Power of Destruction are weak sauce compared to the Black Balls of Truth and other less destructive jutsu.

Wonder how Koneko will react to Naruto being a master of Senjutsu and if Rias and Akeno think they can scare Naruto into telling them who he is then it's amusing as they has no idea just how far out of their league that they are and how will Koneko react to Rias spying on her? Also I doubt that the Evil Pieces can be used on Naruto considering how powerful he is at this point.

Wonder if this will be a harem with Koneko as the main as I haven't seen a fanfic do that before ever.
Dreaming of Unrelenting Storms chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
I like it.

It has a unique flare to it that I haven't seen in a while and it is well written, apart from a few grammar and diction errors here and there. Though I feel as though you could develop the backstory a bit more, maybe go into an indepth look of the day Koneko met Naruto through her point of view.

If you want, I can offer my services as a beta reader and help you better your incredible story.
Kazuyaeu chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Wow. I hope for a update this fanfiction is great a NarutoxKoneko pairing is the best i just hope that this story wont turn to a harem... Lets be real Naruto and a harem?
LazyUxD chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Naruto x koneko ow that's a rare fanfic.. Plss update soon.. Great start...
ultima-owner chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
have him sell a special sweet, a paw shaped dark chocolate bite with a chocolate mousse center called "Neko Nibbles". that sounds so good.
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