Always enjoyed this snippet, enjoy the humor.

I have never seen Babylon 5, but I was able to pick up enough of the overarching plot from your stories that I enjoy these crossovers. Thank you for writing them!

Again with the Marcus! I had hope here that this was going toward Talia! DAMN YOU! :)

This was very interesting...there are so few Harry Potter crossovers with B5.

too bad the targeting system only shutdown and rebooted, it would have been more dramatic to have them target each other.

poor poor Harry...not even back a few minutes and they want to steal his seed.

I like the Vorlons...very simple.

The thing about Jankowski killing Dukhat, is that while it turned out to be a whole series of mistakes, they were mostly on the Minbari side - Jankowski did almost everything RIGHT, based on what he knew at the time!

The Minbari approached with gunports open, while jamming the Human sensors so hard, the Humans could not see whether the weapons were charged. That jamming was so strong, it was actually causing computers to melt, panels to explode Star Trek style, and even threatening life support and reactor stability. The intensity of the scan would be causing radiation damage to the ship’s crew, radiation burns immediately and vastly increasing the risks of cancer in later years. Future kids would be born with birth defects if their parents were on that ship!

That’s not a simple scan, that is a WEAPON that is being used to attack a warship. And it is one hundred percent JUSTIFIED for that warship to return fire when fired upon that way!

You have a typo near the start of this chapter. The Religious Caste language is Adrenato, not Adaranto.

You seem to have a typo, either in this chapter or other Babylon 5 chapters. Here, you called the Warrior Caste language Vik. In other chapters, you called it Feek. Which is it?

You have a recurring typo. The mind reading spell is Legilimens, not Legimens. Someone skilled in using it is a Legilimencer not a Legimancer.

You have a recurring typo. The man’s name is Lefcourt not Leftcourt.

You have a couple recurring typos.

First, they’re Minbari not Mimbari. Second, the Grey Council’s ship is the Valen’tha not the Valenthia. It looks like you got both words wrong 100 percent of the time.

Your analysis of the copyright act is wrong. To be fair use, a work must pass all four of the tests you cited. Fanfiction fails 3 out of the 4 tests for fair use, everything except the fourth - and even that one can be failed, given how some fanfiction authors have actually tried to sue original story authors for having stories too close to their fanfiction!

The only reason most original story authors don’t sue most fanfiction authors is there’s no money in it. The maximum court award is multiple orders of magnitude lower than the cost of even the cheapest lawsuit. That changes if the fanfiction author makes money from fanfiction, which increases the allowed damages to $150,000 per copyright violation - which would be per chapter posted on a site like this one. Most fanfic authors don’t make money from their copyright violations, but ones who use any kind of crowdfunding (including the one that this site deletes if mentioned in a review) relating to their fanfiction DO make money!

i like this one, love Susans character, look forward to more