Reviews for Lone Traveler: Babylon 5 Universes
Difdi chapter 13 . 10/27/2021
You have a typo near the start of this chapter. The Religious Caste language is Adrenato, not Adaranto.
Difdi chapter 12 . 10/27/2021
You seem to have a typo, either in this chapter or other Babylon 5 chapters. Here, you called the Warrior Caste language Vik. In other chapters, you called it Feek. Which is it?
Difdi chapter 11 . 10/27/2021
You have a recurring typo. The mind reading spell is Legilimens, not Legimens. Someone skilled in using it is a Legilimencer not a Legimancer.
Difdi chapter 6 . 10/27/2021
You have a recurring typo. The man’s name is Lefcourt not Leftcourt.
Difdi chapter 3 . 10/27/2021
You have a couple recurring typos.

First, they’re Minbari not Mimbari. Second, the Grey Council’s ship is the Valen’tha not the Valenthia. It looks like you got both words wrong 100 percent of the time.
Difdi chapter 1 . 10/27/2021
Your analysis of the copyright act is wrong. To be fair use, a work must pass all four of the tests you cited. Fanfiction fails 3 out of the 4 tests for fair use, everything except the fourth - and even that one can be failed, given how some fanfiction authors have actually tried to sue original story authors for having stories too close to their fanfiction!

The only reason most original story authors don’t sue most fanfiction authors is there’s no money in it. The maximum court award is multiple orders of magnitude lower than the cost of even the cheapest lawsuit. That changes if the fanfiction author makes money from fanfiction, which increases the allowed damages to $150,000 per copyright violation - which would be per chapter posted on a site like this one. Most fanfic authors don’t make money from their copyright violations, but ones who use any kind of crowdfunding (including the one that this site deletes if mentioned in a review) relating to their fanfiction DO make money!
KongoBongo chapter 11 . 6/9/2021
i like this one, love Susans character, look forward to more
reddir chapter 11 . 4/6/2021
I kinda love what you did with Susan/Talia here.
reddir chapter 10 . 4/6/2021
Using the phoenix/chol like this is great!

And the death dream is a (and a loving Timov!) lovely cap.
reddir chapter 12 . 4/2/2020
This was a kind of brilliant end to the war.
I think it saves face for the Humans, lets them know that a nobility of human spirit is real and even recognized by aliens who want to kill them.
Obviously it defangs most of the problems the surrender brought to the Minbari in the OTL.
And it allows for future contact and even cooperation between the two species based on a shared, more deep and more meaningful than most mutual benefit arrangements, respect for and recognition of nobility of spirit.
reddir chapter 10 . 4/2/2020
Again, the bit at the end made this so good. Again, I am near crying. The touch of adding Timov was so perfect!
reddir chapter 3 . 4/1/2020
All three of these chapters are a good read, but the omake at the end has me near crying. I think what made it great is the Soul Hunter's gratitude, on top of the comfort for the family and child.
AnthonyR89 chapter 6 . 2/18/2020
So, there's a repeated typo throughout this story so far, and in a few chapters of the other stories. mainly, you're typing Mimbari, instead of Minbari.
Jimbocous chapter 18 . 12/21/2017
Thanks. Good stuff!
tpx1 chapter 18 . 8/31/2017
good part in your series
Thank you for moving the shortstories back into the main story thread, that makes it much easier to read
thank you for sharing
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