You have a typo near the start of this chapter. The Religious Caste language is Adrenato, not Adaranto.

You seem to have a typo, either in this chapter or other Babylon 5 chapters. Here, you called the Warrior Caste language Vik. In other chapters, you called it Feek. Which is it?

You have a recurring typo. The mind reading spell is Legilimens, not Legimens. Someone skilled in using it is a Legilimencer not a Legimancer.

You have a recurring typo. The man’s name is Lefcourt not Leftcourt.

You have a couple recurring typos.

First, they’re Minbari not Mimbari. Second, the Grey Council’s ship is the Valen’tha not the Valenthia. It looks like you got both words wrong 100 percent of the time.

Your analysis of the copyright act is wrong. To be fair use, a work must pass all four of the tests you cited. Fanfiction fails 3 out of the 4 tests for fair use, everything except the fourth - and even that one can be failed, given how some fanfiction authors have actually tried to sue original story authors for having stories too close to their fanfiction!

The only reason most original story authors don’t sue most fanfiction authors is there’s no money in it. The maximum court award is multiple orders of magnitude lower than the cost of even the cheapest lawsuit. That changes if the fanfiction author makes money from fanfiction, which increases the allowed damages to $150,000 per copyright violation - which would be per chapter posted on a site like this one. Most fanfic authors don’t make money from their copyright violations, but ones who use any kind of crowdfunding (including the one that this site deletes if mentioned in a review) relating to their fanfiction DO make money!

i like this one, love Susans character, look forward to more

I kinda love what you did with Susan/Talia here.

Using the phoenix/chol like this is great!

And the death dream is a (and a loving Timov!) lovely cap.

This was a kind of brilliant end to the war.
I think it saves face for the Humans, lets them know that a nobility of human spirit is real and even recognized by aliens who want to kill them.
Obviously it defangs most of the problems the surrender brought to the Minbari in the OTL.
And it allows for future contact and even cooperation between the two species based on a shared, more deep and more meaningful than most mutual benefit arrangements, respect for and recognition of nobility of spirit.

Again, the bit at the end made this so good. Again, I am near crying. The touch of adding Timov was so perfect!

All three of these chapters are a good read, but the omake at the end has me near crying. I think what made it great is the Soul Hunter's gratitude, on top of the comfort for the family and child.

So, there's a repeated typo throughout this story so far, and in a few chapters of the other stories. mainly, you're typing Mimbari, instead of Minbari.

Thanks. Good stuff!

good part in your series
Thank you for moving the shortstories back into the main story thread, that makes it much easier to read
thank you for sharing