Reviews for The Cycle Continues Part One: Reunited |
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christianlynn2001 chapter 4 . 9/24/2024 They say the world was buoy for two is a phenomenal story, alas, the ending leaves many (myself included) wishing they’d put a couple more chapters up for closure |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2023 With all due respect, Arya's thoughts and views on Eragon and his feelings for her, simply because of what happened to Faolin, are wrong. She's literally justifying her hating him, treating him like crap, and being disgusted of him, with him, and by him, because he wasn't an elf or didn't know her for years. Also, his feelings for her were more than a crush. That's kind of evident, lol |
Guest chapter 14 . 8/11/2023 So the elves are all racist pricks, fuck them all. Marriage USE to be an elven custom, back before they were immortal. |
Guest chapter 13 . 8/11/2023 Exactly what Murtagh just said, would/should apply to Arya as well, in canon, anyways, since she already abdicated the throne here, lol |
Guest chapter 11 . 8/11/2023 I mean we all already know Arya can be cruel. |
Guest chapter 10 . 8/11/2023 Always felt like Arya should have apologized for breaking that fairth. Even if it was inappropriate, which imo I don't think it was, Eragon still spent time and effort on making it, and she broke it without a thought, or consideration of what Eragon did to make it. Plus it was ridiculous that Eragon practically had to grovel at her feet for her friendship back, when SHE'S the one who ended it. |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/11/2023 Eragon isn't human. Technically he's HALF human, and HALF elf. |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/11/2023 I mean technically speaking, and by all accounts, even elves wouldn't/shouldn't know all of this. |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/11/2023 I mean Arya didn't even notice Eragon's love for HER, why would she have noticed someone else's love for someone else? |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2023 Honestly Arya's kind of bitch. She was in the canon books, and she is, slightly, here. |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/11/2023 Teasing about Arya rejecting Eragon for their age difference is a very harsh low blow Saphira. |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/11/2023 Yeah checked that one out, wasn't a fan. Honestly hate that she loved/loves Faolin. Kind of wrong for her to be with Eragon if she has feelings for another man, plus Eragon deserves to be something other than a second choice. |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/11/2023 Arya shouldn't have been queen in the first place, plus her being queen broke her character far more than her leaving with Eragon would have. |
thunderofdeath97 chapter 23 . 4/2/2023 With all due respect. You claim Arya is/was a virgin? Then why doesn't she act like one? |
Guest chapter 39 . 2/24/2023 I'm guessing Kulkarvek met Morzan and his dragon at some point? I'm guessing that Eldunari was Jarnunvosk. |