Sheesh, Arya's a bitch.

Arya is pregnant, she shouldn't even be sparring right now.

It always annoys and disgusts me, how everyone excuses Arya's treatment of Eragon in the books. Even when writing Eragon, they have him excuse her deplorable behavior. Saying she was right to do it, or that he deserved to be treated that way. It's really wrong.

Yeah, Arya's full of crap. Animals do show pain when giving birth.

Personally, I always found Brom to be a bit of a coward, in regards to fatherly duties.

Well, there's many things Arya and Eragon can do, possibly many different positions too, some of which they might actually enjoy, lol

Arya's an idiot.

Okay, ngl, the whole parents of children with mixed blood/heritage, disappearing, is kind of weird, and far fetched.

What does Arya mean by she wouldn't be able to tell a different fluid other than Eragon's? I don't understand that.

Hanin is an elf. Elves don't eat meat, unless they are starving and have legitimately no other choice. He wouldn't be boiling eggs or eating them.

I don't get why Eragon's stamina is lower than Arya's. They should be equal, or his should be greater.

Arya doesn't really act like a virgin, she seems way to experienced.

Why is this fic rated M? Nothing in it has truly been M rated material.

I don't know, Eragon might like her in stockings, lol

I feel like he's kind of being an idiot for putting their true names on the band. What if someone finds it, however unlikely it may be?

Honestly I find it somewhat amusing (morbidly) and disgusting, that the elves all act like Arya deserves better or is worth more than Eragon's affections, and they disapprove of him. If anything, it's actually the opposite.

Elves don't eat meat, neither does Eragon after his transformation. Why did he have eggs?

So Arya claims she would never harm a child? Well then, what does she call her verbal, mental, and emotional slapping of Eragon when he was younger than? Because she considered him a child.

So if Eragon can't give her a child, she will leave him? Wow that;s terrible.