Reviews for The Cycle Continues Part One: Reunited |
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greenitricoxide345 chapter 17 . 5/24/2019 I feel like the song "Immortals" fits this book perfectly |
skotos07 chapter 23 . 3/23/2019 Where is the links ? |
skotos07 chapter 8 . 3/23/2019 Oh :) just for information i'm a "male reader" and it's very ... embarrassing? hilarious? amusing? at any rate very unexpected, I like it :P |
skotos07 chapter 1 . 3/23/2019 Good story: just can you correct the word ? "Alagaësia" "ë" |
TinnePeeters chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 Oh Lordy I stumbled on this fic by accident but I’m so exited to read it! Ive been an erya shipper from the beginning and I was sooooo hoping that in the new book Arya and Eragon would meet again, but alas. So now I’m going to devour this fic! |
AlexSakurai chapter 40 . 2/25/2019 You made me, the gloomy and moody twenty-two-year-old bearded man, screech with joy like a little girl. Congratulations, you got your way. But seriously, this is an incredibly beautiful romantic story. I have a soft spot for such things, so I'm glad I found this story. I also liked the fact that the marriage of the heroes did not become the end of their story, but only the beginning. You know, so many authors usually write somewhere at the end something like "and they got married, and lived happily ever after, and had a lot of children". Such things. I'm glad you didn't do that. About the amount of fluff in this story: there is never too much fluff, believe me. Fluff for the Fluff God!.. or something. Uh... I'm not very good with words, so... I will go read your next story. Sorry for my bad English, yeah. |
Lucys demon chapter 40 . 1/25/2019 Hey! I’m extremely impressed with how you reunited Eragon and Arya. I didn’t really care for the OCs but it was interesting. I was surprised by how early the baby was conceived but welcome, I look forward to it’s birth! I think 10 years was just right. By the way good job giving Angela a great backstory! Ok I’m moving on to part 2, see you there! |
Guest chapter 20 . 12/19/2018 Your writing style is almost an exact match to the original, amazing story and great work! |
blablablblablablablabla chapter 40 . 12/13/2018 I really enjoyed reading this story and I'm looking forward to learn how the story evolves. |
GrizzD chapter 1 . 11/26/2018 I love this and wish Paolini would continue the series just like these. It makes a girl who loves her romance and her fantasy together have a sense of completetedness that I hadn't had before. Thank you for this mini-series. |
Arctursus chapter 4 . 11/25/2018 This is some good writing. I'm rereading those series for the 2nd (or 3rd?) time and am still surprised how well this is written. No offense to Christopher but not even he could write Eragon and Arya's reunion. I really liked the sequel, Next Generation as well. Waiting for Part 4! |
Hi chapter 4 . 11/7/2018 I read both of the stories, yours and AryaNuanen's twice by now. Still as amazing! |
Decus777 chapter 40 . 10/19/2018 As you delved deeper into Varhog and Willows relationship I naturally found myself wanting to see more of them. The decision to allow Eragon and Arya to play supporting roles down the line make perfect sense to me. It really feels like a natural progression and flows with ease. I’m curious and excited to see how it plays out |
Decus777 chapter 8 . 10/18/2018 I just started reading this and I’m enjoying it quiet a bit. I actually think the anatomy crash courses in this chapter made a lot of sense. I absolutely buy that Eragon would be oblivious to these subjects. Eragon as a character has always been the student, even when he is the master. Which I was always able to relate with him on, as we are people who can learn from anyone. I will say that Arya’s reactions seem a bit out of character. But even that makes sense because we’ve never really seen her this way before. It’s as alien to her as it is to us I think. I enjoy this quiet a bit and look forward to reading more. |
A Spectator chapter 40 . 10/5/2018 Awesome. Best I ever read. Even Paolini couldn't have made this book so nice. Love it! |