Wow Kagome's being ultra mega-stupid about this whole killing slavers thing. Cork it, honey

Este capitulo, en particular, me vuelve a recordar lo castrosa e insoportable que se me hace Kagome a veces, ¡INUYASHA TIENE RAZONES PARA ATACAR ESTUPIDA!, ¡¿QUE PASA CUANDO LO DETIENES?!, ¡LO MATAN!

See that is why I did say there should be a safe charm in the collar of inu... he was in right mind only did want to protect them from a dangerous foes...and this stupid assets did bring him down without asking why it thinking about the old guy from last town he attacked and had a right to.
When I was the poor hanyou I would leave this ungrateful not thinking group and go to my brother.

I don't know what to say , but south is no baby , he should have known better ...never go near a sleeping dog when you don't fully know him and never take something from it ...
...and he did know inuyasha is a demon...dog demon...that he needs the sword to stay sane and for protection. ..how close he gurged the sword he never should try to tage it. ..so instincts are there even when in human form. ...so what bite him in his stupid brain to try to take the sword and swing it? He should had gotten his behind taned for this . But it is something he will remember and never do again , be it with a real dog or a demon...even there fat lazy cat would have scratched him up when he had startled her out of sleep in such a way.

But kagome and there group and her family need to remember . He is no stupid dog to order and push around...what is also wrong to do...but he is a demon. With all the instincts and acting . Kpuga would never accept some of there behavior without putting them in there place when to much...Like the noisy asking things for secrets or feelings...they to don't bare there soul and tell every feeling and fear or worry or a hough they have. ..but he needs to tell?
When they want to know about inu childhood story they need to ask sesshomaru...

And this osuwari when ever she wants is also wrong .this sometimes is like with a slave control . there must have been put in a fail proof charm so it can't be used more than once a day or once every 6h only ...or only when youkai of him is out of control and only way to control to calm down..

I wonder why kagome does not see inuyashas memory loose for what it is. ...she did have to learned it in school...psychological problems are something you learn in school when you learn about the human body ...that bodily harm or bad trauma can cause memory loose
...what ever this Bastard villager did and this asshole of an old man must have been so bad that a till then under control hanyou puppy did loose the whole memory of 6-7years and did become mistrusting u aggressive to hide behind...that could be because of years of bodily harm up to rape and trying to kill him or his mother after this year's in front of him.

But one think I don't ever understand is kagomes two way thinking...human not to be killed even when they did kill or are bad...but youkai who just follow there instinct that are boosted by the corrupted shards they xan be just killed? Why not just beat them up take the shards away and give them to the Lord of the land for judging. ...

Bandits and gone crazy samurai where often not nice or good and ifree did tereivle thints to women and children and males...they would be made a head shorter when caught ...
So why should they bot kill them even more so when they just did want to attack then and take them as slave for what ever terrible purpose...when they would go away they will do it again to some helpless baby youkai or harmless adult youkai and human female later on...

Checking in offline.
8 yrs and 4 months later still wait for that update. Story like this needs a proper finish.

LUV_ANGEL (like it says offline reading)

This is a fantastic plot. I hope you would one day finish it :)

Bitte weiter schreiben! Es gibt noch so viele offene Fragen! I know it has been a long time since the last update, but I do hope you will one day answer the still open questions! It is such a good, captivating story with a lot of action, mystery and character's introspections. I especially like your detailed writings about the problem of the subjugation beads/rosary, personally I don't like them either.

I know this says last updated 2011 but I would love to see it continued one day. I am still hoping against hope that Sesshoumaru will like. Bring Kirara back to life or something. So cruel!

I find it so sad that it has been four years since you've updated, especially since it seems you had something planned. But, I remember reading an AN saying that you've had a three year gap, so I hope you have not forgotten this wonderful and immersing piece of work.

This fic is good I won't lie about that and really gets into the feeling of the characters and whatnot. But it is very repetitive every conservative and thoughts are the same as chapters we just read. The only excitement is when they meet others or are fighting. And I has hoping there would be more about inuyasha and his past. Not him having a nightmare, kagome questioning inuyasha, gets mad, she tell everyone in the group, repeat, repeat and another repeat. There needs to be less inner thoughts more talking, less walking and sleeping themes as they are all the same
Walking
Inuyasha: *gets mad* "I'm gonna hunt"
Kagome: "here's what inuyasha said today.

sleeping
Inuyasha: * in tree printing to sleep*
Kagome : *pretending to sleep*

These scenes are getting boring to read

end of rant

The first flashback is of inuyasha being sold (i think in that village). The second is him playing with kids after living there for 3 years. It kinda confusing who were they sold to and did the second flashback happen before the first one? Or are the flashback just at random based on places

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please finish this!

I would love it if you wrote more! I know it's been a while since you last updated, but this is too good to be left at that! This is definitely one of- if not the best Inuyasha fanfiction I've ever read!

OMG IM IN LOVE WITH THIS PLEASE COME BACK SOON I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED AND WILL HAPPEN TO MY PRECIOUS BABIES! Now that the rant is over, time for the technical nitty-gritty:
I love how this has progressed so far, and the point in time from which the story starts is very original compared to most other fanfictions. Everything is incredibly original and well planned, and I can tell that a lot of thought has gone into this. I like how you portrayed everyone, and how you portrayed the villagers. It feels very accurate and seems like the natural reactions from people of that time period. The plot thus far has kept me on the edge of my seat, and not a single chapter went by without my heart rate increasing at least once. Everyone is very much in character (except for mama higurashi, but it did not detract from the story at all) and everything they do feels natural and unforced.
Again, I hope life lets you go long enough so that you can try to work on this again if you feel like it.
Much love and smushes,
Kenzie-chan~