Reviews for It's in her Blood
Ireland Scott of BROH chapter 28 . 9/12
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Mindmaze chapter 1 . 9/9
I know a lot of stuff happens in this universe and the police just aren't a thing but I figured that was mafia secrets and it got covered up. Tsuna got shot in class with all of them as witnesses and your telling me the culprit wasn't arrested? I mean if he's sending her flowers he's not in jail. Don'y get me wrong it's a very good fic and I like how your not afraid to add your own stuff and not just follow cannon however my sense of justice just wouldn't let me leave this fact unremarked.
Raven Silversea chapter 28 . 8/9
I understand that you're rewriting this, but I just have to say wow. This was amazing! I love how you slowly fed little bits and pieces about the world throughout the story, just enough to satisfy my instant curiosity but leaving me with a hunger for more. My personal favorite thing about this is how you wrote Reborn. I honestly feel like he cares a lot about his students in canon and it was amazing to read something where that care is shown while still leaving him the dark, mysterious, annoying jerk that he is. Well done. Now, I'm off to the rewrite
Guest chapter 2 . 7/31
I can't even believe how ridiculous this is. The guy that shot her didn't get punished? He got away with it? He brought a fucking gun to school and fucking SHOT someone. And he doesn't get punished? No punishment from the faculty, no scorn from his peers. And this main character just forgives him. HE SHOT HER. I can't even stress how fucking unbelievable this is. There's a difference between being forgiving and being a fucking doormat
Guest chapter 5 . 7/31
I normally like femtsuna stories but this is so ridiculous. She just continues to accept this kind of treatment. She doesn't fight back or say anything.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/31
Could she not just tell her mother? There's no reason why she should just take the bullying and pretend to be fine. The whole "I-don't-want-to-tell-anyone-my-problems-because-I-don't-want-to-trouble-them" archetype gets tiring quickly
Guest chapter 2 . 7/31
What the actual fuck? She got fucking shot, and no one was punished? Seriously, no one. The guy that shot her got off with just an apology. I'm sorry, even if your story is good, this is just ridiculous. She's like a freaking doormat.
Rosy Fire chapter 2 . 7/31
I can't even believe how ridiculous this is. The guy that shot her didn't get punished? He got away with it? He brought a friggin gun to school and friggin SHOT someone. And he doesn't get punished? No punishment from the faculty, no scorn from his peers. And this main character just forgives him. HE SHOT HER. I can't even stress how unbelievable this is. There's a difference between being forgiving and being a fucking doormat
SakuraKoi chapter 28 . 7/3
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Alcham of the Vael chapter 13 . 6/9
You've changed your style drastically and your spelling has gone down the crapper. If I didn't know any better, I'd say you're a different author using the original's account. Or, rather, that somehow you got a hold of the original story and then decided to post it as yours.
Ari27 chapter 16 . 5/14
Um...you said you got an English Spell Check but you spelt 'Check' wrong.
katsekala chapter 28 . 5/13
It was great! I'm surely going to read the rewritten one! Many kisses!
Quatermass chapter 8 . 5/12
Booyah! And I have to confess, despite detesting the premise of "Reborn!", I'm actually enjoying this fic. This is one of the only "Reborn!" fics, other than sakurademonalchemist's, that I actually want to read.
rysolneko chapter 1 . 4/18
This history is awesome!
-Sorry sorry my bad English, Im Mexican-
Is was a great beginning.
Besos~
StorytellerD132 chapter 27 . 2/20
still hate the cliffhanger...
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