|Reviews for Shattered|
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/28/2016
Did you say your not a native English speaker? I don't think I believe you! :) This story is written so well. It's so enthralling and tragic and exciting and - let me tell you now - you write far better than many of the native English authors on this site.
Naturally there are some errors (such as a previous chapter in which you repeatedly said "no one else than her". Technically, it should be just "no one else" OR "no one other than her" OR "no one but her".) But, over all, mistakes are minimal. Please don't stop writing; I'm so into this!
| HinaLuvLuvChan chapter 5 . 1/20/2016
I love this! Omg it's so good, I can't wait to read more!
| viridianaln9 chapter 5 . 12/25/2015
I like it.
| Wynni chapter 5 . 12/23/2015
Oh sweet mercy, this was a joy to read, and I didn't find any mistakes for you to have to claim. You'll be happy to know things ARE getting better, but slowly. *hugs* Thanks for the sweet dedication. It made everyone at home smile.
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/31/2015
Omg your story is amazing ! Can't wait for the next chapter xxx
| kkolmakov chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
I finally started on your story and I have to say, I'm really enjoying it. It is a wonderful set up, the initial premise is very engaging, and the world is built in interesting details. I immediately liked John (and then liked her even more once I watched your video on YouTube and now she looks like Billie Piper in my head, and I absolutely adore Billie, especially since DW :D)
I love the mixture of the two realities and the alternative universe Britain is shown very well.
This chapter was very emotional and it has a very good pace. I love your writing. I unfortunately am not proficient enough in French where I can follow the plot but can't comment on style, but in English your writing is very emotional. I loved it! The repetition, the mixing of two realities in one, a wonderful protagonist: you are up for a great start!
| Ahryielle chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
You wrote this near the beginning of the chapter, you should probably go back and edit it.
Red words are for a romantic bond.
Green means a romantic one, and black means that the bond is ended because of death.
| viridianaln9 chapter 4 . 7/26/2015
Oh this was really good and I cannot wait for the next chapter.
| twirlgirl4life1 chapter 4 . 7/26/2015
Poor Sherlock. He'll be coming back to John and Sebastian going at it like rabbits
| Wynni chapter 4 . 7/26/2015
Very insightful, busy, and thoroughly enjoyable read. Broke my heart reading the death scenes, though. So, the dragons, Bilbo, and Thorin have come back.
Whom else might we run into?
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2015
HOLY CRAP! I can't wait to find out who oakenshield is!
| Selyne Nightshade chapter 3 . 7/20/2015
More please! Thank you! :)
| viridianaln9 chapter 3 . 7/20/2015
Oh this is really good, really that scene was tough to read. I cannot wait for the next one.
| TMI Fairy chapter 1 . 7/19/2015
This is a Hobbit fic?
Put it in crossovers ...
| Wynni chapter 3 . 7/19/2015
Glad I could be of service. Like I said, youv'e got me good and hooked, chicka. Cain't wait to see the next chapter.