Reviews for Young and Built to Fall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great fic! it's very heartwarming and fluffy, but with enough of the adventure and fun to not be overbearing about it good luck with whatever you're up to these days |
![]() ![]() So good but is this the end? |
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![]() ![]() I loved this fic! It was amaizng and everything i wanted. You are a brilliant writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are magical... You... Thank you ... really thank you ! I'm just gonna grab some snack and coffee and tissue boxes to get settled for this ride. love you WW |
![]() ![]() What a great fic! There's really something special about time travel fics that focus more on character development than repeating canon events. I really love your take on the genre! Thank you so much for writing this C; |
![]() ![]() I love that Ace's thought process amounted to: We should lay low and not draw attention. *two seconds later* Ah, a Galleon. Let's take it over. Priceless! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ever since I discovered this fic a few weeks ago, I keep coming back to it because it is so well-written, I adore Ace and Luffy's relationship here, it is everyhting they should have had the chance to have and show us in canon. I am curious about why Luffy doesn't tell Ace about Sabo - is he afraid it will prove too much guilt for him? It does feel like the one big thing that Ace would have a difficult time forgiving Luffy for hiding from him. For some reason I would love to see the ASL pirates pop up again - I feel like after all the shenanigans they are actually very-well prepared for the Grand Line and are probably a very successful minor pirate crew, my headcanon says they run a slave-freeing operation parallel to actual piracy. I keep picturing the Whitebeards anchored in Sabaody, waiting for the strawhats, and Ace running into the ASL crew. The commanders promptly invite them over for a party, hoping for juicy teen Ace stories, and instead only come out more confused and alarmed than ever about Ace and Luffy's childhood. Johnson: so then Luffy called up a Sea King - Thatch: he what Samson: yeah, to cross the Calm Belt Izou: I'm sorry, CROSS IT? Ace: Yeah? What were you expecting us to swim it? Marco: this is 100% beside the point and you know it, stop trying to be funny |
![]() ![]() ![]() dios, que gran fanfic, de verdad me ha gustado mucho, espero que no hayas olvidado el fic y lo continĂșes, es demasiado bueno, admiro tu trabajo, saludos |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's a great book. thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi ! Thank you for the story ! I have my fingers crossed that this story will one day be continued. 3 The development of Ace and Luffy is just superb, and I can't wait to get past the canon events to see what you'll come up with next. (By the way, I know there is no slash, but there is so much AceLu vibe that for me they are in a platonic relationship. X'D) Thanks again ! 3 |
![]() ![]() I wish for more but considering the amount of time since the last update I understand it isn't going to happen. Love the book though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) pretty good, keep it up! i especially enjoyed the interactions between luffy and usopp and luffy and robin, so if this is still going on after 5 years, i would like to see more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Need more |
![]() ![]() ![]() As long as this stays platonic/familial, I'm perfectly fine w closer brothers Ace and Luffy! Really well written btw! |