Reviews for Young and Built to Fall
Blue-Happens chapter 15 . 9/20
this is a great fic! it's very heartwarming and fluffy, but with enough of the adventure and fun to not be overbearing about it

good luck with whatever you're up to these days
Guest chapter 15 . 9/18
So good but is this the end?
ramsesjames05 chapter 15 . 9/13
Guest chapter 15 . 8/17
I loved this fic! It was amaizng and everything i wanted. You are a brilliant writer!
WizardyWitchy chapter 2 . 7/10
you are magical...

You... Thank you ... really thank you !

I'm just gonna grab some snack and coffee and tissue boxes to get settled for this ride.

love you

AccidentalChild chapter 15 . 1/24
What a great fic! There's really something special about time travel fics that focus more on character development than repeating canon events. I really love your take on the genre! Thank you so much for writing this C;
N chapter 4 . 1/16
I love that Ace's thought process amounted to: We should lay low and not draw attention. *two seconds later* Ah, a Galleon. Let's take it over.
Eternal She-Wolf chapter 15 . 1/9
Ever since I discovered this fic a few weeks ago, I keep coming back to it because it is so well-written, I adore Ace and Luffy's relationship here, it is everyhting they should have had the chance to have and show us in canon.
I am curious about why Luffy doesn't tell Ace about Sabo - is he afraid it will prove too much guilt for him? It does feel like the one big thing that Ace would have a difficult time forgiving Luffy for hiding from him.
For some reason I would love to see the ASL pirates pop up again - I feel like after all the shenanigans they are actually very-well prepared for the Grand Line and are probably a very successful minor pirate crew, my headcanon says they run a slave-freeing operation parallel to actual piracy. I keep picturing the Whitebeards anchored in Sabaody, waiting for the strawhats, and Ace running into the ASL crew. The commanders promptly invite them over for a party, hoping for juicy teen Ace stories, and instead only come out more confused and alarmed than ever about Ace and Luffy's childhood.
Johnson: so then Luffy called up a Sea King -
Thatch: he what
Samson: yeah, to cross the Calm Belt
Izou: I'm sorry, CROSS IT?
Ace: Yeah? What were you expecting us to swim it?
Marco: this is 100% beside the point and you know it, stop trying to be funny
Luffyswife05 chapter 15 . 12/4/2022
dios, que gran fanfic, de verdad me ha gustado mucho, espero que no hayas olvidado el fic y lo continĂșes, es demasiado bueno, admiro tu trabajo, saludos
arubaturos chapter 15 . 10/26/2022
it's a great book. thanks for sharing
Goliatth chapter 15 . 10/6/2022
Hi ! Thank you for the story !
I have my fingers crossed that this story will one day be continued. 3 The development of Ace and Luffy is just superb, and I can't wait to get past the canon events to see what you'll come up with next. (By the way, I know there is no slash, but there is so much AceLu vibe that for me they are in a platonic relationship. X'D)

Thanks again ! 3
Phoenix-ya chapter 15 . 8/9/2022
I wish for more but considering the amount of time since the last update I understand it isn't going to happen. Love the book though.
thyjohann1234 chapter 15 . 7/9/2022
:) pretty good, keep it up!
i especially enjoyed the interactions between luffy and usopp and luffy and robin, so if this is still going on after 5 years, i would like to see more!
LordLucifer666 chapter 15 . 5/26/2022
Need more
Marcii Winters chapter 1 . 5/4/2022
As long as this stays platonic/familial, I'm perfectly fine w closer brothers Ace and Luffy!
Really well written btw!
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