Reviews for The Bite
Nonnie chapter 1 . 3/3
2nd person perspective
already decides what the wol's gender is
Well, that's one way to break immersion. For future reference if you cannot go around using 2nd person, it's best to leave the wol ambigious for these kinds of fics.
kc-archive chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
Incredible! Really the only time I've enjoyed second-person. I like the restraint from both characters, the way both are clearly mature and professional but still toying with the idea of affection and relationships as if they were some childish fancies. Would really love to see more FFXIV stuff from you.
Kerzturion chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
Very nice little story, and very cute on top of that.
Nothing to fear about second person or present tense, it's well written :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
I miss Haurchefant now... beautifully written.
Arie chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
Beautifully written. I love the denial/tension from both parties. Would love to see a sequel/continuation of something more. Because Haurchefant. :3
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2015
all the good things right here 3 ~Panda