please continue this story I wouldn't have read this unless you had asked me to but it is very good so plz continue

This is good. Thank you for reviewing my story. :) This is actually better than mine truth be told.

Well that was horrific... I hope you decide to continue, and please put the Point of view of the Characters.. It wasn't until Middy started talking to Milo that I realized that it was Milo. I really like the bond between Raph and Venus (AKA Vee). Though Karai's name is spelled wrong.. It's not Karki but it's alright.

Wow, I was confused at first. I love it. Is a one shot or is it gonna continue?