Reviews for Unexpected Complication
Renee Aubin chapter 23 . 2/7
Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. I usually click right past AH stories that involve Edward and guns, but your hints about Bella in the summary got my attention. I’m so glad, because I was totally involved in their story. Your “lippy” Bella was awesome, and I was pleased to see a homeless person get some major air time. I loved watching Edward struggling with his growing attraction to Bella, and with how much to tell her. Carlisle was a treat too. It’s fairly rare in fanfic to find authors who are skilled at suspense and action, and you get high marks on both. Plus my new favorite nickname: Mouse! Well, along with “fuckwit”, of course.
jess 'twilight matrix chapter 23 . 1/21
I loved this story! Great job!
momma2fan chapter 23 . 1/18
Great job. Loved it!
blondferretgirl chapter 23 . 11/29/2017
Love It!
PurpleRain27 chapter 23 . 11/18/2017
Once again an excellent story. Love your work.
RENDA WARREN chapter 23 . 8/17/2017
THAT WASGREAT I LOVED IT, THANK YOU.
BRENDAWARREN chapter 9 . 8/17/2017
CANT WAIT TO HEAR THIS.
BRENDA WARREN chapter 8 . 8/17/2017
IS SHE CRAZY WHAT THE HELL WAS SHE THINKING?
BRENDA WARREN chapter 7 . 8/17/2017
I THINK THE BOTH OF THEM ARE ITS JUST AMATTER OF TIME NOW
BRENDA WARREN chapter 6 . 8/17/2017
YES ITHINK HE'S FALLING FOR HER BBUT IS SHE FALLING FOR HIM [SNICKER]
BRENDA WARREN chapter 5 . 8/17/2017
WHERE DOES BELLA COME UP WITH ALL THE SHIT SHE PULLS HELL SHE COULD WRITE A BOOK ABOUT HER CRAZY ACTS.
BRENDA WARREN chapter 4 . 8/17/2017
I THINK EDWARD IS FALLING FOR HER DONTYOU?
BRENDA WARREN chapter 3 . 8/17/2017
I'M WITH EDWARD I OOULNT STOP LAUGHINGSO HARD I WAS CRYING.
BRENDA WARREN chapter 2 . 8/17/2017
THAT WAS UTE AND FUNNY.
grandmachix chapter 3 . 8/9/2017
He's gonna have a time gaining her trust.
Judy
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