Another reread of this magnificent fic complete. Still stellar as always. But two things:
1. Rosestark is too much of a mouthful. Maybe something like Rostark rolls of the tongue better, like Karstark.
2. The Lannisters of the Summer Isles are beginning to feel like Gary Stus. They are always right, do virtually no wrong and Allarion has apparently caught Sarella's eye despite how boring he is. I hope Joy Hill confronts her deadbeat father on the circumstances of her birth.

Varys? The master of ships? Think that needs a correction

Damn... that's a little, well i think that was rape, he didnt remeber thought it was a dream was delirious and not in his right from heat, grief and exhaustion. Now hes got a kid and he cant even acknowledge him.
Sucks for ned

I've just finished to read all this amazing story of yours! It's really been a wonderful ride! I'm impressed with your imagination and writing skills. I can't wait to read more! Thanks for sharing this masterpiece!

I really enjoy this story!

This isn a great story, I love it and can't wait to hopefully see Eron the dammned get his comeupance at Harrenhall. The curse is lifted, the power lost and all thanks to The Old Gods and The Starks. Maybe since there's no more rightful heirs the Lady of Harrenhall wil;l request of King Robert that it be passed to the Youngest male Stark whether it be Ricon or the new babe.
I look forward to this story more thna you know and love it very much.

Good chapter... even though I'm a bit surprised by the fact Bloodraven didn't use his ability to see the past to check Euron Greyjoy's deeds.
Looking forward next chapter! Thanks for the update.

that bit right at the end with theon is just a pefect moment. it does away with theons fears and settles him down a bit. gives him a more even keel to his personality in the future too. with the trust in ned and him being acknowledged like he was wanting to be, i doubt the whole iron reaver thing is gonna happen *fingers crossed* no reek!

Men I had read this fic 3 times already and every time I do, it give me goosebumps. this is the best fic I had ready in my entire life. every chapter is so well writed and the story is so rich, it really the best suspense and mistery fic out there, please continue writing.

Finally got around to reading your epic tale, and i am blown away. Thank you for sharing your fantastic imagination and reshaping of GRRM's universe . This is awesome !

Maester Aemon according to lore his dragon egg was color . Also in canon Rhaegal(the green ) was Jon's mount.

Well, well, well. This is interesting. The twist on Valyria is interesting - and there's a lot of questions about that, rightfully so.

Well, Bloodraven is... fairly brutal. But not unexpected.

Each chapter is amazing & mysterious

Hope you finish the story! Its been a great read