Reviews for Mother Father |
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LaPumuckl chapter 31 . 8/1 This has been an interesting plot and i remember while reading honor I'd promised myself to come back one day when it was completeThsnk you for sharing this as well xx |
Moltz chapter 31 . 4/23 That’s the most perfect ending to a fanfic I’ve read in a very long time. Thank you for sharing your gift of story telling. |
Moltz chapter 29 . 4/23 Will she meet Emmett and Rosalie again? The idea of those two being immortal watching the family move on through life and eventually die is very sad. |
Moltz chapter 28 . 4/23 Yay, Emmett has been keeping watch. He will save her from the hasty retreat of Demetri’s guards. Who was in the unmarked helicopter? So Emmett and Rosalie are vampires, lol. Edward is going to freak out. |
Moltz chapter 27 . 4/23 Love Jasper’s protectiveness hiding information from the Feds to save for Bella. I don’t think Uncle Demetri should be brushed off because Felix sacrificed himself to cover the family crimes. How long will Bella remain in protective custody? |
Moltz chapter 26 . 4/23 Where on earth would Jake come up with $20k? Philip and his team might have the means to investigate the Newton’s but Bella will be a bigger tartlet as they close in on Michael and his dad. Initially the Senator will have to distance himself from family. But his connections to the Rossi family will turn against him. This just continues to grow beyond their original plans to return a kidnapped girl. |
Moltz chapter 25 . 4/23 Yup, peg Micheal as the leak. Jake is going to have a hard time getting him out of the way since the family connections are high up in the government. And calling the shots. |
Moltz chapter 24 . 4/23 I’m still puzzling over the Ghost/helper(s) on the island. Bella felt their presence and knew when someone was watching her. So Jake is now the sole person in the planning process of keeping Bella safe. Is he being tracked by one of his double-crossing agents? Bella’s declaration to Charlie that her physical relationship with Edward is consensual seemed to have the desired effect. |
Moltz chapter 23 . 4/22 Well, I think the coupling will be a small issue after the rescue is complete. How did they get in if they didn't use scuba gear? |
Moltz chapter 22 . 4/22 Emmett and Rosalie are helping, but how? Edward is going to be hurting even more after working to loosen up the stones from the cave-in. |
Moltz chapter 21 . 4/22 Oh boy, another cliffhanger. Edward won't stop until he has moved every stone out of his way to get to Bella. Will Emmett show up and help? |
Moltz chapter 20 . 4/22 Edward is trying to balance his fears of the outside with the unusual circumstances of their current situation hold up in Jack's survival cave. Bella's figuring out how she can love the ones that kept her away from her biological father? |
Moltz chapter 19 . 4/22 I have a weird thought that Emmett is the one Bella saw standing at the open to one of the tunnels. Then he punched the rock causing it to crumble. I'm surprised Edward hasn't tried the rhythm method to relieve his blue balls, or request a bj. |
Moltz chapter 18 . 4/22 Adrenaline from the fight or flight response took Bella and Edward to heights they never expected when they finally gave into each other. Dirty talking Edward is something to behold. I'm wondering about the rest of the group and how they faired? |
Moltz chapter 17 . 4/22 Is Newton the leak? How would they have found the island otherwise? Jake wouldn't put his wife in jeopardy. I'm sad that Jack was collateral damage. |