Reviews for Mother Father
sarabo chapter 2 . 10/21/2016
Excellent start! Now on to the meat of the story!
Guest chapter 31 . 10/12/2016
So beautiful. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
blb1000 chapter 31 . 9/27/2016
I love this ending and your mix of AH & supernatural. You snuck the hints in little by little, so it didn't overwhelm the a story. Bravo!
blb1000 chapter 29 . 9/27/2016
Oh hell! They're vamps. Nice twist!
blb1000 chapter 28 . 9/27/2016
I have to say again... WTH?
blb1000 chapter 27 . 9/25/2016
I'm trying to picture young Mike and 2 older versions of him, in stripes! ;-)
blb1000 chapter 26 . 9/25/2016
When you set up those scenarios, I believe it's because they will be needed. Like the cabin escape route.
blb1000 chapter 25 . 9/24/2016
I suspected Newton too. Who wouldn't suspect the Golden Reliever?
blb1000 chapter 24 . 9/24/2016
I like that you went with gold bands instead of something fancier as they usually do in other stories.
blb1000 chapter 23 . 9/24/2016
I was wondering how long those condoms had been down there waiting.
blb1000 chapter 22 . 9/24/2016
Thank you for including the spirits. I enjoyed their interaction.
blb1000 chapter 21 . 9/24/2016
Crap! Again. ;)
blb1000 chapter 20 . 9/24/2016
Hectic. I'm worried about everyone outside the cave too. They locked them out of the cabin when they left.
blb1000 chapter 18 . 9/24/2016
Um, no condoms in that survival kit, I guess. Charlie really will kill him.
blb1000 chapter 17 . 9/24/2016
WTH?
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