Reviews for Mother Father |
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vampdreams chapter 31 . 9/18/2016 Awww...amazing story I love the relationship the protagonists share.. Also a fan of how emmett and rose have been incorporated in their lives :) |
jr chapter 5 . 9/9/2016 Thank you for your fanfiction story! i enjoy it a lot more especially stories Bella playing a tough cookie and not afraid to put people on their place. |
midnitereader chapter 31 . 8/28/2016 I liked the epilogue. Emmett wants so hard to be there as his brother weds the love of his life. It is sad that he can't be there standing next to Edward as his best man. Edward senses that his brother is close but I'm not so sure he believes Bella's revelation of seeing him. He would like to, because he misses Emmett so much. But it's against the rules for Emmett to reveal himself physically. Maybe when Edward finds the novelty condom in his toiletry bag he'll believe it. A very bittersweet ending to a wonderful story. |
midnitereader chapter 30 . 8/28/2016 I've read most if not all of your stories and I'm always amazed by the depth of your stories and your characters. And this one does not disappoint. I love the background of Isabella Swan/Rossi. She has two sets of parents that have loved her deeply. And when Felix and Irina are taken from her, she learns about Renee and Charlie. The story moves along so quickly. Just a girl wanting to spread her wings decides to go to college in another country. And along the way she meets Cole Braedon, alias Edward Cullen, who has been sent by the FBI to discover if she is the long lost daughter of Charlie Swan. Not content for this to be just the usual college fic, we have intrigue as she is on the run from people that are trying to kill her. Edward protects her and they fall in love. The cast of characters develop as we meet Jack and Nessie. I knew there was more to the disappearance of Emmett and Rosalie. Their bodies were never found. And I suspected that was Emmett in the cave. But I really liked how you introduced Rose and more of Emmett as they rescue her in the ocean. And they are not mere ghosts as I first thought because they had those golden eyes. I love that supernatural spin on this tale. You get the feeling that Emmett will always be there to protect and watch over Edward throughout his life, for he wishes his brother to be happy. Thanks for the journey it was fantastic. |
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 31 . 8/18/2016 Loved, loved, loved this entire story! You are very creative and have a warm, but exciting style. |
Guest chapter 31 . 7/31/2016 This was just great! just excellent! just wonderful! I loved it! |
LoveBite92 chapter 31 . 7/4/2016 Oh man this last chaoter made me cry so hard. I loved the story so much! I can't wait to read more from you! |
tlyxor1 chapter 31 . 6/27/2016 Thanks for writing. I enjoyed very much. -t. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2016 Wow. So emmet really was a vampire. Huh. Didn't c that coming. |
Guest chapter 29 . 6/25/2016 I knew it! I knew em and rose were the ghosts. Could c that coming from a mile away. Nice story xx |
JustARead chapter 31 . 6/14/2016 Awwwwww bittersweet |
JustARead chapter 29 . 6/14/2016 No way! |
JustARead chapter 28 . 6/14/2016 Emmett? A vampire? This fic is taking a turn |
JustARead chapter 27 . 6/14/2016 Crazy |
JustARead chapter 26 . 6/14/2016 Foreshadowing again? |