I think this is the first time I read Edward's face compared to Lucifer's. I like this Bella

Aww I was getting excited for them to meet!

I like this Jake. And Edward is an FBI agent? omg so hot
thank you!

Great story! I loved it!

So I've been questioning the situation with Emmett and Rosalie ever since Alice explained and i can't help thinking they aren't dead. No bodies. Assumed dead right. Like Bella. But she wasn't dead so here's to hoping. I can't work out why they would kidnap 2 adults though... I mean Emmett is freakishly big and strong I guess and Rosalie is usually a beauty so I dread to think why dodgy people might steal her. They could blackmail Emmett through Rosalie so they can use his intimidating size. Ugh, I'm so desperate for Emmett not to be dead that my mind is thinking of so many weird possibilities and because of the nature of this story and the kind of people that this story deals with things get a little dark.
I also have a theory that the guy Bella saw when she woke up was Emmett. He would be incredibly pale if he'd been trapped in the cave for ages with just food supplies...I mean it could be a different section of the cave with different supplies and he was only able to enter the rest of the cave after the explosion.
Also I thought it might be Emmett because the big crash was just after Edward told Bella a how he goes to see Rose's Dad and they take her car out to keep it running. It just seemed to me like maybe emmett had an emotional outpouring and his reaction was smashing the wall somehow in his distress. Edward looked at the rock and seemed confused by the way it had smashed too.
Also I really want to know how old Edward is. I know Bella is 18 and Edward is definitely older then 21 but by how much?

Nooooooooooo Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack :( And what about Nessie and Charlie and everyone. Ohhhhh help

Okay. This story... you have me officially hooked :D

Oh help. this could get so horrible and messy. If Edward "pretends" to be in a relationship to get information out of Bella (though we all know he will genuinely fall for her hence the messiness) then when this goes down not only will Bella loose all her barings and her foundations in that she had loving parents but she will loose a man she trusted (Edward) leaving her feeling betrayed and like she can't trust any relationship in her life. Not to mentiion she might feel like she sent her parents to jail. Poor Bella. This could lead to her needing years in therapy. It sounds so morally wrong.

OMG love this story and I got it all Right! Especially the Emmett and Rose! Woohoo.

Wanted more but you ended it perfectly!

Absolutely loved it. Thanks for sharing

Oh I bet she's gonna rip him a new one

Poor Isabella

Aaaaand let the action begin

Love how their relationship is evolving

Omg talk about a c**kblocker