|Reviews for Potter of Legends|
| Dreams Of Athena chapter 1 . 2/11
I really liked your first story, it was awesome. I was starting to lile this too but I just found the 'romance' between Harry and Rachel started way to quick and just didn't feel right. the whole time all I could think about was Ginny and how Harry is definitly not one to jump in so quick with that. I do love your writing and while I'll probabaly not finish this story I want you to keep writing. It's obviously going to be amazing just not my cup of tea ya know
xxx anyway good luck!
| lojosmom chapter 19 . 2/10
I loved your story. The final battle between Harry and Voldemort was written perfectly. Voldemort initially underestimating Harry was very believable and Voldemort losing his head was great!
I also loved Kevin and Lucy. They were great OCs.
| lojosmom chapter 6 . 2/8
Great chapter with lots of action. I love that a muggle got the best of Bellatrix! Your description of Voldemort's temper tantrum was perfect. I could see that maniac killing one of his followers while raging about Harry. I also loved the Harry vs. Fudge scenes. I can't stand Fudge. He reminds me too much of Trump!
| Dave B chapter 19 . 1/26
perhaps a chapter on an invite to Rachel's graduation from medical school?
and perhaps a chapter on Rachel's grandfather being attacked and near dead when Rachel contacts Harry (possibly using the house elves to send messages, as owl's would take a week at least, if at all possible) Harry visits to help, grandpa, who has been placed in suspended animation so "the poison" doesn't progress more and kill him.
I would not presume to write chapters for your story.
| Asfar ali chapter 19 . 12/28/2017
It has been a wonderful experince reading you stor wounderful writter with no doubts i would like to ae that u show harry somewhat in problem or pain so as to enlight the true frndship of his frnds further more i assure u that like me everyone would be delighted if u would continue the story i knw that there is not much left bt i belive u will come up with somethg u truly deserve apreceation
thank u fr providing us this blessing of story may Allah bless u
my number if u want some suggetion for the nxt partsp
| Guest chapter 19 . 12/25/2017
AMAZING should be made into a movie
| BillBrink chapter 19 . 10/7/2017
I thought your first story was stronger. Things in this one were a little too pat without much failure or tension. The romances were not as well done as his first, especially for Ginny and we didn't get to see his break up with Susan. In fact, it was as if Susan just dropped out of the story completely. The battle was very good. It just seemed as if you were working from your outline near the end and wanted to check off the points you had made. I wondered why you added some things near the end, for example turning himself into the dragon. Wasn't the griffon impressive enough? It did the job on Tommy, why did he need something even bigger for the rest of the DEs? But the whole was entertaining and kept my interest. Thank you for sharing it. I hope you continue to write.
| garybrister1965 chapter 6 . 7/18/2017
Luna picked the name Lolita, lol, it fits Her great.
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 18 . 6/23/2017
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 13 . 6/23/2017
Early in the chapter, but Ginny seems to be taking Harry's dating Daphne well. And Harry, all dad's seem scary to boys. It's a dad thing.
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 10 . 6/23/2017
Drop big rocks on them from on high. Hey Nev, get a regular greenhouse and have harry hit it with an expansion charm. Girls, it couldn't happen to a nicer pair of friendlies. Harry, get with the goblins. Claim your titles and inheritances. Claim slytherin by conquest. Then Harry can attack Tommy as Tommy's head of house. Tommy died so he is no longer eligible. Between an attack on his head of house and for stealing harrys blood, magic ought to have a field day with Tommy, before drops rocks on his head.
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 6 . 6/23/2017
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
Of course Harry would do well with elements, given his ability to feel the magic. I'm almost surprised that teacher that felt him didn't latch onto him
| Madhatter chapter 19 . 6/21/2017
I have read this this story twice now and so far have not got tired of it. Great job
| alsmolek7452 chapter 1 . 3/27/2017
I just spent the weekend reading both of these stories I thought they were excellent. I loved the action and the feel goods the story gave me I really like stories that just make you feel good. I also enjoy a super powerful Harry. Once again I really enjoyed the entire story.