Well written story.
The problem is that there are so many chapters where nothing happens.
It would have been a lot more interesting for the story to actually start.
It seemed like a really long prologue.

This is nonsense. Why go to Volantis and unravel the tangled skein when he already knows it would lead him to Tywin Lannister?

Just binged this a few days ago and would love to see it continued.

Please let Harrion find brightroar.

manipulative little bitch

I don't know why but I find Ashara annoying, not at all cute or endearing with her demanding ways.

This was a great story... what a waste. If you don't want to finish it as you are busy with the other crossover, you could easily modify this last chapter and give it a proper if abrupt ending. One last paragraph where he reveals his heritage, marry and lives happily ever after or, as more proper for GoT, for 5 minutes.

The idea of going to Oleana for help after a single conversation as proof that she would help a peasant woman is silly and naive at best, trusting a stranger with her family's safety was complete idiocy the irrational attachment to a country instead of safety is another idiotic move, it seems that despite the knowledge gained from the books this Lily is an overconfident naive fool.

Alas ch 11 did not disappoint other than being another appetizer before the promised main course. but ch 12 to 15 are amiss, and years separate the promise.
So i hope you are healthy, erll and enjoying life.

Best use of apparation twice! Glad Harry has another confidant. Do many pieces, and as it is 2023, i know all your thoughts didnt get addressed in the one remaining chapter. Thank you for all the research, Harry in actual relationships, and delaing with the harshness/depavity/nobleness/fraility of life in the age and era of your story.

... almost 6 years have passed and I'm back here re-reading this fic again. I truly hope one day to see this updated or even an outline of what would have been.

Seriously! You have Harry reveal himself to Tywin, he's got a keep and lands of his own and is all but guaranteed to be in some sort of relationship with either Ashara Dayne who's essentially a goddess in human form or with Janna Tyrell who's meant to be a super model to the extreme. Hell the Targaryens had multiple wives for years, no reason Harey himself couldn't likewise be blessed with such luck.
You was also approaching Roberts rebellion in a few short years which would have been awesome to read about from this new perspective.
There was so much more to see in this story and it being abandoned like so is beyond disappointing

noooo please moreee

Maybe a rewrite instead of Myr. Harry could have gone to Lys and raid the bank to get Truth. In Old Valyria find Brightroar.

Dang, this is one of those stories I would have loved to see the continuation of.