Reviews for forever and again
cantlivewoutHawkMash chapter 7 . 11/16/2004
You are never gonna update are ya? I wanna read wat HAPPENS! HURRY!
cantlivewoutHawkMash chapter 8 . 6/1/2004
good plot gadzooks but you have got to slow the story down! everything is happening too fast! ya need more details, and LONGER CHAPTERS! plus, everything is hectic and confusing! ya need to explain things more!
angeleyes46 chapter 8 . 2/11/2003
cool story. i can't wait to read the next part.
darkdancer chapter 4 . 1/25/2003
If you'd like i'd be happy to be your beta reader
Raven chapter 8 . 1/14/2003
Noooooooooo! Continue! Fight the urge to give up! There are people counting on you! Keep writing!
rev chapter 8 . 1/14/2003
okay, I've read every chapter, some twice, and I'm still lost. What's going on? I hope yur later chapters will explain everything.
Anne McSommers chapter 7 . 1/13/2003
seems good so far, buti want more. you need longer chapters, update less, and make the chapters longer, it is easier to read that way
gadzooks chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
ok everyone, i didn't have time this week to write, but i'm on it. i had so much sleep to regain, and i've been too into the last few episodes that's i've completely forgotten about the computer. so i'm starting up again and a new chapter will be out soon, cheers.
sarah chapter 6 . 1/9/2003
OHMYGOD! Please put the next chapter up soon.
Anne McSommers chapter 6 . 1/4/2003
this is getting weird, but i like it. continue.
Anne McSommers chapter 5 . 1/3/2003
cool, this seems to be getting good
gadzooks chapter 5 . 12/31/2002
i'm so sorry i accidentally spelt a name wrong, it's diane klepper not klapper, i'm terribly sorry and it will be fixed immediatly
Anne McSommers chapter 4 . 12/30/2002
od this story is geting good. i like the new twist.
gadzooks chapter 3 . 12/28/2002
hi readers if you were wondering what i was trying to say in the last chapter, i was saying that i've done the spacing thing on the second and third chapters but i've gotta get to another computer to get the first chapter so it'll be revised later. thnx
CassTheCurious chapter 3 . 12/28/2002
The plot's getting interesting, but you really need to both use spell-check and get a beta-reader.
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