|Reviews for The Secret Diary of Fleur Delacour, aged 16 34|
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/9/2013
haha well I am thinking the last name of their house is to complicated to pronounce!
| claire chapter 3 . 12/9/2013
me again, I LOVE your writing, seriously! you could write a book!
| claire chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
this is awesome please please please write more!
| CMVreud chapter 29 . 10/27/2013
So she takes the moonstone that shows her the way through the maze, but not the one who shields her from harm?
Now I really have to ask. Is she one of those dum-dum dumb blondes?
I mean she's a pureblood witch (well, with a bit of veela), do they exchange their logic for magic?
| CMVreud chapter 28 . 10/27/2013
I don't know if it is because she is half veela, but answering a question in an finished story is quite loony.
| CMVreud chapter 24 . 10/27/2013
Seeems that they not have Seers over there.
Or, at least, use them in their curriculum de school.
| HaywireEagle chapter 11 . 9/13/2013
Hmm, I thought Olivander did reveal the core in the book if I remember right. Oh well.
| Tomon chapter 31 . 8/31/2013
And so we finished Harry's fourth year. I really liked how you handled the whole story. Using diary may not be original but it's still unique enough and you did well.
You written this story some years ago and the most surprising thing I found about it is that you don't have much more reviews :) You would deserver it.
It's definitely one of the best H&F fanfiction and while they didn't get very far since you followed canon for most of the year. I really found it nice and sweet.
And just so I don't praise all along :-P I'm still wondering why Fleur never thought about Pettigrew being the rat she found going through her things. Especially given how that rat reacted. And while I could ignore this accident, another thing is that she seem to never said to anybody about Peter meeting her mother after she saw him to help ressurect Voldemort.
Yeah and little nitpicking. When we first read the prophecy, they're is a typo and insted of "Dark One" there is "Dar One" which got me thinking for a while :-D
Anyway overall really enjoyable story and I'm glad I can immidietly start on its sequel. Awesome job ;)
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 31 . 7/20/2013
This is the first story I read where the writer willfully gave the readers a " thoroughly dissatisfying end". I wanted to call you a name but my religion forbids it.
| BlackRevenant chapter 29 . 7/17/2013
Too bad I got to this story so late.
Would haveloved for Cedric to have lived.
| Darkened Void chapter 31 . 7/6/2013
Great story. I shall set forth immediately to read the sequel!
| LordFira chapter 29 . 5/27/2013
I was a bit dissapointed, for it being a romance, it was surprisingly lacking...there really wasn't much romance at all, between the main characters at least.
Yeah there was interest, but the interaction between the pair could have probably been surmised in less words than one of your chapters.
It seemed more like friendship and comfort and adventure.
Aside from that you are a great writer. Looking forward to the sequel.
| LordFira chapter 4 . 5/27/2013
They weren't Virgins!
It's an Eva Ibbotson Book!
| HoosierCullen chapter 31 . 5/7/2013
Okay this was a good fic and reading from Fleur's POV was interesting. The fact that you had Cedric and Cho dating way ealier than canon was confusing but the way you did it made it work. See what I would think is if they were dating that early everyone would know escpecially Harry being as caught up in being infatuated with her. The way you had Fleur learn about Harry and gain a relationship with him was very well done. Margeaux and Iphigenie were good characters to keep Fleur company and I caught on pretty soon they were together. Now to the biggest annoyance. Why would you put Hermione with the red headed food disposal unit. He is a boysterous and annoying character that has only three things in his life; talking about Quidditch, Wizards Chess, and making Hermione cry. She never seemed as interested in Ron as you made her seem and he did date Lavender in sixth year and showed no infatuation for Hermione till that time. Harry seems to be more infatuated with her at this time. Okay Harmony rant over. The story has it's quirks and I can't wait to read the sequal.
| Lunaris-wind chapter 31 . 4/9/2013
Yes, a very dissatisfying end, as you say. This story is impressively long, and also impressively slow. It dragged, a lot. You introduced a number I plot points that don't make sense because they are not followed through. Will that change in a sequel? No idea, but in terms of this story, it was very long to read. I didn't dislike it, but I can't say I liked it either.