Reviews for The Secret Diary of Fleur Delacour, aged 16 34
Simianpower chapter 1 . 9/28
Wow. This, right here, is exactly why people dislike Fleur. She's portrayed as possibly the most self-centered, vapid airhead around. You want to give her depth and character and THIS is how you start? With a 16-year-old prima-donna bitch? I was really curious about this story, because I'm one of those who actually LIKE Fleur as a character, both in canon and fanon, but this Fleur I abhor. Won't be continuing.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30
I did not know that people wrote dialogue in their diary.
Fan chapter 7 . 8/7
I know you'll probably never read this, but Fleur is my favourite character in harry potter. I guess I like how she's the opposite of me. But I hate it when people misjudge her as a self centered mean girl. She's brave and inspiring and you did a really good job at portraying that. Well done on writing a fanfiction that I read every night! You're very talented.

Olivia xxx
Tony McNucklz chapter 27 . 3/22
I'm literally skimming past all the avalon nonsense. it's bad enough Rowling had the one prophecy now you have a second? and the female equivalent of merlin is alive and helping fleur prepar3 for voldemort? so what was she on the toilet during Grindelwalds massacres or did she just not care when it wasn't happening on British soil? story was going so well too, but this avalon stuff might be too much for me.
Bronze chapter 1 . 1/28
Oh yee of little imagination! It's quite simple to write three quarters using the numbers! Just try it this way. 16 3/4 and there you have it!
Ravenfeather2002 chapter 28 . 1/19
Wormtail stole it, duh. I'm surprised Fleur hasn't made the connection between the first time she saw him, Harry's rant and seeing him in Hogsmeade.
GOD DAMNIT chapter 23 . 1/2
Every time. EVERY FUCKING TIME. It seems as if every story I read on this god damned site starts off with a small change that seems like a good storyline. And EVERY FUCKING TIME it leads to some sort of heir, or some sort of prophecy, or some sort of SUPER SECRET SPECIAL POWERS just fucking popping up! It fucking kills me when I get most of the way through the story and it turns into the cliche "They were destined to be together!" Step up your game nigga!
hey chapter 1 . 1/2
Fuck you
harryislife chapter 31 . 11/6/2015
I like it its very good. Its interesting to have a different perspective tgan Harrys every now and again.
WinterRain36 chapter 9 . 10/20/2015
This sucks
Guest chapter 16 . 8/24/2015
Hmpf. There should have been a big thing with Harry riding a unicorn!
Guest chapter 14 . 8/24/2015
I hope Harry goes to the ball with Luna! (As friends)
katiek121 chapter 31 . 7/21/2015
I enjoyed reading his story! All of the new characters you introduced were well written! How did you come up with the idea? The extra little prophecy/story was good! I love Gabrielle. She is too adorable and wicked smart! I plan on reading the sequel!
katiek121 chapter 6 . 7/19/2015
I do find this story very entertaining. I just realized something- in the original series Beauxbatons was s girls only school, but you turned it into a boy/girl school. I'm not aganist that, don't get me wrong, but why did you make that change? I'm curious to find out what will happen!
katiek121 chapter 5 . 7/19/2015
I like the new competitions you created.
I also realized my answer to the unicorn question was wrong as soon as I posted, but it was too late.
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