|Reviews for The Secret Diary of Fleur Delacour, aged 16 34|
| the epicslime chapter 4 . 6/2
My answer to a is because they were horny mail unicorns ... Get it horny ?
| Random reviewer chapter 5 . 2/25
But I knew about both!
| nagoth chapter 31 . 1/19
Fantastic i love F/H ff's and yours was rally well done. Hope the sequels finished xxoo
| Antaxocide chapter 1 . 12/29/2016
| mckertis chapter 31 . 11/11/2016
- it took you too blody long to get to the part that is ANY different from the canon
- even when it is different - it doesnt have any impact or real consequences
- Hermi pining after Ron...eww
- Fleur's best friends are revealed at the very end to be lesbo pervs...and this mattered enough to be included... why exactly ?
I think i wasted my time with this fic.
| Simianpower chapter 1 . 9/28/2016
Wow. This, right here, is exactly why people dislike Fleur. She's portrayed as possibly the most self-centered, vapid airhead around. You want to give her depth and character and THIS is how you start? With a 16-year-old prima-donna bitch? I was really curious about this story, because I'm one of those who actually LIKE Fleur as a character, both in canon and fanon, but this Fleur I abhor. Won't be continuing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
I did not know that people wrote dialogue in their diary.
| Fan chapter 7 . 8/7/2016
I know you'll probably never read this, but Fleur is my favourite character in harry potter. I guess I like how she's the opposite of me. But I hate it when people misjudge her as a self centered mean girl. She's brave and inspiring and you did a really good job at portraying that. Well done on writing a fanfiction that I read every night! You're very talented.
| Tony McNucklz chapter 27 . 3/22/2016
I'm literally skimming past all the avalon nonsense. it's bad enough Rowling had the one prophecy now you have a second? and the female equivalent of merlin is alive and helping fleur prepar3 for voldemort? so what was she on the toilet during Grindelwalds massacres or did she just not care when it wasn't happening on British soil? story was going so well too, but this avalon stuff might be too much for me.
| Bronze chapter 1 . 1/28/2016
Oh yee of little imagination! It's quite simple to write three quarters using the numbers! Just try it this way. 16 3/4 and there you have it!
| Ravenfeather11037 chapter 28 . 1/19/2016
Wormtail stole it, duh. I'm surprised Fleur hasn't made the connection between the first time she saw him, Harry's rant and seeing him in Hogsmeade.
| GOD DAMNIT chapter 23 . 1/2/2016
Every time. EVERY FUCKING TIME. It seems as if every story I read on this god damned site starts off with a small change that seems like a good storyline. And EVERY FUCKING TIME it leads to some sort of heir, or some sort of prophecy, or some sort of SUPER SECRET SPECIAL POWERS just fucking popping up! It fucking kills me when I get most of the way through the story and it turns into the cliche "They were destined to be together!" Step up your game nigga!
| hey chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
| harryislife chapter 31 . 11/6/2015
I like it its very good. Its interesting to have a different perspective tgan Harrys every now and again.
| WinterRain36 chapter 9 . 10/20/2015