Reviews for American Kitsune!
Guest chapter 11 . 2/20/2017
Dude come back and update this interesting story, wanna see what happens next.
PrintedSnail11 chapter 11 . 2/5/2017
Intresting story, left it off on a cliff hanger. I hope you continue it
Guest chapter 10 . 1/27/2017
Please update this next
Guest chapter 8 . 1/26/2017
Stan doesn't have any good qualities have you seen the things he's done in the series
Reader chapter 1 . 1/26/2017
I agree you shouldn't bash Steve that much but Stan deserves most of it
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2017
Please update
Reaper's Blaze chapter 11 . 1/26/2017
I've give you a rundown the story's flaws right now

1 Demonizing characters(mainly Stan, Steve and Jeff) so Naruto won't look like a badguy for seducing their Wife/Girlfriend.

2 Whitewashing characters of any flaws(mainly Francine Hayley and Lisa).

3 Douchebag Mary Sue main character.

4 Story has absolutely no substance.

5 Story pretends to be something other than an excuse for lemons.

And here are the positives

One of two stories I can find with Naruto banging chicks from American Dad.

So yeah, this fic is not very good if you wish to improve it I would recommend this.

Stop the bashing, can Stan, Steve and Jeff be stupid jerks at times? Yes but that's not only thing to their characters, especially since it looks like you're taking away all their good qualities so Naruto will look better.

Don't make it seem as if there's nothing wrong with the fact Naruto is screwing other people's wives and girlfriends, on that case don't make Naruto look so perfect, that's one of the worst things you can do because that makes him boring and the main character shouldn't be boring.

While we're on that subject don't make it seem as if the girls in Naruto's harem are flawless either, Francine can be impulsive, airheaded, and selfish, Hayley can be reckless, self righteous and if anything she's a worse girlfriend to Jeff than he's a boyfriend to her, and don't get me started on Lisa she's manipulative, elitist and a bully that's why she's an antagonist in the show.
Reader chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
Will any of the girls get pregnant next chapter
Snakebolt505 chapter 11 . 1/17/2017
Can Stelio kontos make a aperance in this
Jyuubi no Naruto chapter 11 . 1/17/2017
Awesome story
thesleepingkami chapter 11 . 1/2/2017
Awesome please writw more soon
Guest chapter 11 . 12/22/2016
Chapter 12
Silver crow chapter 11 . 12/19/2016
I don't know if you take challenges but I've got one for you

This challenge is a Naruto and Archer challenge where basically Naruto is the worlds greatest Spy/Assassin despite being young say 17 who gets recruited by Malory despite the fact Naruto is already stupidly Rich he joins really for the hell of it and to get a laugh or two and this would be just before season 1 episode 1 so Naruto can have the fun off all the agency's adventures from there haha and can help the Agency become something you know better like a better ODIN

Of course the pairing would Naruto X Harem with the likes of Lana and Cheryl but also Anka ( you know since she is of appropriate age to be with Naruto thought there isn't any harm in making her the same age if you felt the need to ) Ana Maria, Rona , Katya, Keikos twins, Newlywed ( I'd give her a name ) etc etc with Naruto having meet the likes of Katya on previous missions where's he's beaten them to the target and flirted with them and has worked alongside them before on world saving missions hell if you wanted to you could even de age Malory some how and add her to the pairing

So yeah hope you consider this doing this challenge and I look forward to your next update
demonzone2571 chapter 11 . 12/18/2016
Please continue
Mirandayesboo chapter 6 . 12/6/2016
This is a Naruto, American Dad, and Bob's Burgers crossover right
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