jesus! this girl is bonefide psycho! poor poor Tim. reminds me of that one episode where the dude was kidnapping women and dressing them up in a 50's style wedding dress and keeping them locked in a basement room designed to look like a 50's style home for them.

Poor Tim, trapped by crazy lady

Good, you're back, we've been waiting for you to update this story.
Well, it looks like Tim's in some very real trouble. He doesn't have very good luck with women, does he? Hopefully the team will arrive before Tim's forced into something he'll regret.
Please update soon.

Fast moving story, you don't mess around do you? Lots going on in these first 5 chapters. Good story set-up, clean conversation, suspenseful & dramatic. Maybe you're going a might too quick. It's better to let your readers absorb whats happening before you go to the next scene. I had to go back & reread once or twice, after getting a little turned around. The pace is just a bit too fast. Take a breath, relax, read to yourself what you've written, then let the story flow normally, don't rush it. It will get there & be awesome.

Good story so far. I think that the mystery sender of the emails is now based in NCIS HQ, otherwise how would they know to booby-trap the car. Hopefully, Gibbs will get the identity of that second woman from either Captain Keller or PO Walker.

This is such an amazing story! I love it!

Next update please.

Interesting. McGee's been in DC for 2 years or more, given that Abby's reminding him of her stalker. Wonder if any of his more recent girlfriends have been found dead? NCIS wouldn't necessarily have heard about them.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

* Well, it looks like Tim has a stalker. It's good to see that Gibbs is right on top of it. Lets hope that it's enough. I have a gut feeling that it has something to do with the investigation at Norfolk. It seems that somebody is aware that Tim could be a threat to whatever they're doing. It looks as though they're keeping tabs on him. Maybe trying to find a pattern or some sort of weak spot that would give them an opportunity to remove the threat... McGee.
* Thank-you for sharing this story with us. I'm looking forward to your next update, hopefully soon.

Really good beginning. I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Please update soon!

Poor McGee! Not only does he apparently have a stalker, but he gets so awkward around Gibbs, he tries so hard but he just can't seem to read his mentor's mind!