Reviews for Fates Be Changed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() idk I find it quite annoying and out of character for Mateo to have kept his silence about believing Loki was under the influence of the scpeter yet kept his silence... then shows no remorse or concern over seen the man in such a state after they are reunite, then accepts his help. it's giving shitty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1. love it, so much fun! 2. lemme share some info with ya, wandering: to walk aimlessly. wondering: to quesntion about something. |
![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never understood how Pettigrew hid from Lupin all year. Same as how Dumbledore was snookered by Moody. Plot holes in canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Canon having Malfoy, without his two little friends, overseeing the dragon hatching always seemed a reverse deux ex machina - not an uncommon way too introduce conflict in fiction. Good that you didn't have the Avengers ride in again. So far, a very readable and original crossover. |
![]() ![]() ![]() His flying is also from canon, so no real stretch. Everything else... You did apologize for being late in updates. Life and your muse have to come before your writing hobby. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you have ever been in a small place with bread baking, you would smell it. Besides that, I am enjoying the beginning of the fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Millenium Stadium is in Wales |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 55 confused me because they’re talking about him like he’s Harry Potter, but I only thought that McGonagle and Flintwick knew about that? |
![]() ![]() What a joy to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everything ever since Harry followed Loki has been almost a totally different fanfiction than what went before it. I can understand taking a week to get rid of the horcrux, but now he spent 10 months with the dude without contacting Bruce more than to let him know he was alive... now he is traipsing around with Sherlock... Did you take drugs in between chapters and decide to run with it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bruce Banner is gonna lose his shit When he finds out his adopted son I've been entered into the Try Wizard Tournament |
![]() ![]() Harry better not end up with the red hair stupid fan girl whore slut of a mother of a banshee because I'm dropping this shit if he does. Peter parker would be a better fit for him than the creepy stalker |
![]() ![]() Is harry stupid why would he go after the snake and the gold digger whore banshee future slut ginny. He should had gotten professor fliwick and minnie |