| Reviews for Fates Be Changed |
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   collegegirl2805 chapter 4 . 7/25/2015 So far i love the story. As far as issues you need to watch out for run on sentences and you might want to try and be a bit more descriptive, not that i can really comment on that one, i can never properly describe thhe scenes of my own stories. If you want i can go over your previous chapters and edit a bit. Im bored, lol. One of the reasons i like your story so much is that there are very few grammatical errors, which is really impressive |
| LivininCorsets chapter 4 . 7/24/2015 I like the story so far, but the vernacular seems a bit old fashioned at times, to the point that it seems like it's in the Victorian era...I have never heard someone say "I shall return" except in old movies. Then again grammar is different all over. I'm in the U.S. And I have only lived in the south (virginia Georgia and now Hawaii... Which is neither north or south but hey it's pretty.) |
| Orange3WhiteSkew chapter 4 . 7/24/2015 He should have paid more attention to what Vernon's attitude was implying. (Did he assume that there just weren't any pictures of Harry because the Dursleys weren't fond of him, or did he not notice there weren't any of Harry?) |
| Silvermane1 chapter 4 . 7/24/2015 Dumbledore did even punished the dursley for abusing Harry |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2015 Update soon this is amazing! |
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 3 . 7/23/2015 Good story so far. I like the relationship that is building between Harry and Bruce. Thanks for sharing! |
| foxchick1 chapter 3 . 7/23/2015 Hope you update soon |
| Tolion chapter 3 . 7/23/2015 I love where you're going with this so far and I can't wait to see what you do with it; especially once either the first hp book gets introduced or the avengers timeline depending on which you plan to do first. |
| bigbangfan91 chapter 1 . 7/23/2015 Really love the idea around this story look forward to more |
| Orange3WhiteSkew chapter 3 . 7/22/2015 So sweet! :) Papa Bruce and Mateo are cute. |
| calileane chapter 3 . 7/22/2015 Hello, I liked the fact Bruce is trying all he can to control the other guy so he will not be a risk to Mateo. I will probably come to adore your story because: 1. I love when Harry escape from the Dursley's and find a new family 2. I adore crossovers and avengers/harry Potter is a must I can't wait to see all Bruce will teach Mateo and how they will live the next few years. Although I'm a little worried Harry/Mateo will have to go back to England to go to Hogward as I prefer when there is a clean cut from England I actualy will follow your story as far as I can because your writting makes me want to read more. And when you find someone with words flowing so easily you can practically see a picture of what you read... well you can't stop reading |
| candinaru25 chapter 3 . 7/22/2015 this is just so adorable. bruce is a great guy, with a little anger problem. lol |
| shadow-binder chapter 3 . 7/22/2015 Too cute :3 Looking forward to more of this story! :) |
| Separ chapter 3 . 7/22/2015 Very nice story so far! I'm sure the green guy will love Mateo too... |
| Fae0306 chapter 3 . 7/22/2015 Wonderful! |