Reviews for The Impala, The Brothers, and The Witch
zombiekins5948 chapter 30 . 9/23
Please updates
MagicInTheStars chapter 30 . 8/28
You got this! I believe in you!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/24
Careful with your character assasinations. You don't have to be over the top with them to get the point across to your readers. Just say, "this fic will not involve wizarding Britain beyond the introduction, and it will be Hermione/Dean". Ron's blow-up doesn't have to be completely irrational and vitriolic, not do the other Weasleys need to be treated as shallow assholes. Just say that she and Ron got in a fight about their future plans and didn't work out, and that Hermione wanted to leave the main 'Wizarding World'.
You alienate readers if you completely destroy characters they like, which is dumb if those characters won't appear in the fic to begin with. Hermione can make her own life decisions without the sob backstory.
Grovek26 chapter 30 . 8/24
Excellent chapter. Perhaps, if you are struggling, you might be ready to start winding the story down. Then onto a new story!
alliesmiley2 chapter 30 . 8/24
love the update!
SereniteRose chapter 30 . 8/24
wlecome back, another lovely new chapter, thanks ever so much I'm so glad that you haven't lost your muse, because this is a very awesome and brilliant story, and you write really great. thnks again.
ngregory763 chapter 30 . 8/24
Thank you for this update! You have woven such a great story here and I am really enjoying it.
666Spektor chapter 30 . 8/23
MagicInTheStars chapter 29 . 7/27
That definitely needed to happen. Lol 3
MagicInTheStars chapter 28 . 7/27
Does Lucy have to fight with Harry for Death's subjugation? Or would it be just impossible for him to make Death do his bidding simply because he isn't the owner of the deathly hallows? These are questions I need answered!
MagicInTheStars chapter 27 . 7/27
Oh jeebus.. if theyre well aquainted with Death himself, does that mean that getting his ring later will be easy as pie?
MagicInTheStars chapter 26 . 7/27
Draw the memory out into a penceive! Then go to Gringotts and ask the most skilled goblins to find a loophole! That's the only thing thats sure to work!
MagicInTheStars chapter 25 . 7/27
Poor Hermione... but Dean did something stupid.
MagicInTheStars chapter 24 . 7/27
Oh jeez...
MagicInTheStars chapter 23 . 7/27
Time to go grave robbing!
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