Reviews for When Heroes Fall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was so excited to see that you updated. I'm finally caught up now! Anyway, I love how real you've made Link and how realistic his relationship with Ren is going. I also love the relationship between Link and Zelda and Link and Midna. Just beautiful. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD |
![]() ![]() Hi! I never comment on stories, but I love your writing so much. I adore the way you took the wonderful story that Nintendo gave us and you’ve just created this bold, beautiful world. Chapter 20 literally made me cry. I love the tale that you’re telling and your storytelling decisions always astound me. I’ve been with you since the beginning of What Makes A Hero and I still eagerly await every new chapter that you write. Keep up the amazing work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SPOILER ALERT: I apologize for the late review, but holidays and work have been crazy. First of all, that was fantastic. I couldn’t help, but read three times, the first time I was at work, second time on lunch with distractions, but the last time just me and my phone. Link was being more than “kind” to the King, and Ren is falling for the king’s evil plan. I wonder what he is planning. Seeing Link reunite with his family made me want to cry. I suppose him seeing Calie as a young teenager was probably a shock. Last he saw her, she was a baby. When Bo punched Link, I was kind of expecting that, especially after what happened to Iila. Ren’s heartfelt break done, you could feel for him and Link. Though, he doesn’t know why Link loved Midna (or if he still does) Any child wants to see their parents together and in love, but sometimes reality is cruel. To be honest, not everyone has that. I know they have changed drastically, but I want a Midna and Link scene that is heartfelt and she could admit she loves him! I know it might not happen, but one could dream. MAJOR SPOILER ALERT REGARDING ROUGH DRAFT: I love how Link was able to converse with who he spoke with and glad he was remembered. Now merely awaiting and answer and thank you for speaking up, Midna. That was a nice little sneak peek! I cannot wait for the chapter patiently lol xD |
![]() ![]() I hope to see a great Hylian War amongst races. maybe getting back to some tmeple. Definitely the Yetis. I would also love to see link back in Wolf Form. Keep it up Selphie, your work is awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() a bit late but god damn the more i read the more everything went to shit ! but i liked it ... lmao agh i just want peace for link n midna n ren ... n basically just everyone. but it aint that easy when ur reading this story huh lol i'm ready for more suffering |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read the warning and whooa boy! Rubs hands together. You do the angst and conflict aspects of this story so well! |
![]() ![]() "The people in Castle Town are idiots." Ashei, you took the words right out of my mouth. Glad I'm not the only one who sees it. |
![]() ![]() Okay, that ending is just adorable. |
![]() ![]() How is the crowd this gullible? Is there not a single person, aside from the protagonists, who is able to spot the physical signs of dishonesty and guilt? Even allowing for distance, his behavior throughout this chapter should have tipped at least a few people off that Viscen is a slimy toad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get so excited when I get a notification saying there’s another chapter up. I devour each chapter as soon as I can and they’re always so good! I’ve reread the first one countless times, and this sequel even more! Hands down my favorite LoZ fic, you’re doing a wonderful job here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... Well stuff happened. I wonder if it's possible for Ilia's spirit to show up at some point... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your two comments might just be the dumbest I've read. I ask that you do not review my story when you so clearly have not read it. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ...on addition to my review below, I should have checked your username. Bet Irvine cheats on Selphie 3 times a week. |
![]() ![]() Link a cheater? Disgusting. Not everyone cheats and don't use the excuse that this is realistic. Stop promoting cheaters. Once a cheater always a cheater. He'll cheat on her with another. |